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[求助] 这几句摘要审稿人觉得有问题,不知道怎么重写,请都各位虫友

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Research on the molecular flow transmission probabilities of tubes is important in vacuum science and technology. This study examines an algorithm based on Monte Carlo method to calculate the molecular flow transmission probabilities of any regular polygon tubes. This method fully utilizes the symmetries of regular polygons to simplify calculation. Results show that when the cross-sectional areas and lengths L of regular polygon tubes and cylindrical tubes are constant, the molecular flow transmission probabilities of regular polygon tubes increase slowly and approach those of cylindrical tubes with an increase in the number of sides. The absolute values of the relative differences between regular triangle tubes with minimum transmission probabilities  and cylindrical tubes are no more than 2.8% in the range of L ≤100 (the cross-sectional area of each tube is  ), which means that any regular polygon tubes almost possess the same conductivity as that of cylindrical tubes in the free molecular flow regime.
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1. Abstract, line 6 following. English needs to be improved, but also content is unclear: "Constant" in which sense? "Increasing slowly" in which sense? "2.8%" of what?
constant 打算改成the same,其它二点不知道怎么改?我感觉挺清楚的,唉,为何审稿人说unclear?
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句子太长容易产生误解。建议不要太长,有时尤其是自己不怎么能够说得清楚时还是简练一点好!
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