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andersonlyw

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[求助] 这几句摘要审稿人觉得有问题,不知道怎么重写,请都各位虫友

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Research on the molecular flow transmission probabilities of tubes is important in vacuum science and technology. This study examines an algorithm based on Monte Carlo method to calculate the molecular flow transmission probabilities of any regular polygon tubes. This method fully utilizes the symmetries of regular polygons to simplify calculation. Results show that when the cross-sectional areas and lengths L of regular polygon tubes and cylindrical tubes are constant, the molecular flow transmission probabilities of regular polygon tubes increase slowly and approach those of cylindrical tubes with an increase in the number of sides. The absolute values of the relative differences between regular triangle tubes with minimum transmission probabilities  and cylindrical tubes are no more than 2.8% in the range of L ≤100 (the cross-sectional area of each tube is  ), which means that any regular polygon tubes almost possess the same conductivity as that of cylindrical tubes in the free molecular flow regime.
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1. Abstract, line 6 following. English needs to be improved, but also content is unclear: "Constant" in which sense? "Increasing slowly" in which sense? "2.8%" of what?
constant 打算改成the same,其它二点不知道怎么改?我感觉挺清楚的,唉,为何审稿人说unclear?
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zhouquaner

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虽然不太懂,但还是祝楼主修改后送稿顺利吧
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7楼2012-10-23 10:56:03
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andersonlyw

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The maximum absolute value of the relative differences between regular triangle tubes that possess the lowest transmission probabilities and cylindrical tubes is 2.807% at L=10. 审稿人也觉得这句不清楚,我感觉挺清楚的,请问:怎么回事?怎么改?
2楼2012-10-22 22:21:25
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好像constant 改成the same问题更大,用fixed是不是好一点。slowly删掉算了。什么的2.8%?
3楼2012-10-22 22:40:12
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andersonlyw

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3楼: Originally posted by visitor958 at 2012-10-22 22:40:12
好像constant 改成the same问题更大,用fixed是不是好一点。slowly删掉算了。什么的2.8%?

删掉slowly好像可行,
"2.8%" of what? 我是想说,relative differences(相对偏差)是个数值,我的中文意思是:在管长L 小于100时,通过概率最小的正三角形管与圆管的相对差值的最大绝对值小于2.8%。
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