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Ⅰ.Write about internet in some 150 words. Try to cover the following points.
1.        How do you like internet surfing?
2.        What do you think is the future development of the interent?
3.        How does interent change your life?

Ⅱ.Write a short passage on “trust”.  Your writing should include the following information.
(about 150 words)
1.        相互信任是人与人交往的基础。
2.        现代社会需要信任。“
3.        没有信任的社会是不存在的。

Ⅲ.Writing about 150 words on the topic “Happiness”. Your writing should include the following infoumation
1. Whether one is happy or not is decided by          .
2. To be happy,we should try to          .
3. To be happy,we should avoid          .




























Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on college campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in liberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday.
Internet surfing has attracted college students like magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globalization. First,with the global coverage of Internet,we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet,we can send and receive E-mails at any time much faster, cheaper and more effective than conventional means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of libraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire all kinds of information, to know what is going on all over the world. Finally, by clicking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on all sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offhrs many opportunities. For example, we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet.
    In the Information Age, it is difficuh to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com companies mushroomed everywhere. Internet is revolutionizing our economy, our society and our life.












In our daily life,we communicate with the acquaintances,such as our parents,teachers,friends and we trust each other,so we can live a happy life:doing work with pleasure,having classes with delight,we can conclude that trusting each other is the base of contacting with people.
As we all know, our country is devoted to build a harmonious society. it’s a world full of honest, friendly atmosphere, justice, fair and open competition between social members, regions and departments.but now,we cheat instead of trusting each other, every home there must be with an anti-theft door to keep safe. Some new bicycles are locked with two locks, but even that cannot prevent them from being stolen.so,trusting each other is more needed in our modern life,and what can we youth do to build a harmonious society,the direct way is to be loyalty ,loyalty is the basic foundation for people to trust and communicate with each other, thus, keep the society in harmony.
No matter What in developed countries or developing countries,trusting each other is indispensable ,no trusting society is not exist!  











1. Whether one is happy or not is decided by his feeling. Anyone can be happy or unhappy. True achievement lies in our struggling towards happiness. However, it seems quite strange to many people that we make an effort to be happy. We just assume that it’s the feeling which comes as a result of good things brought to us.
2. To be happy, we should try to do three things: Firstly, we should try to realize that unhappy things also exist in others’ live. Secondly, we should try to get rid of such imagination. Thirdly, we should try to explore whether acquiring our lost things will really make us happy. As to the lost things, there being many choices, we can get it again, replace it , forget it or focus on the things what we have now. It all depends on ourselves.
3. To be happy, we should try to avoid comparing with others, imaging to be perfect or worrying about losing title. Therefore, if we can pay attention to all these things above, I believe that we can be happy finally.
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xuzhipiao1: 金币+5, 谢谢 2012-10-05 17:42:12
写得太好了 可能无可挑剔  哈哈 我是看不来  级别不够
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写的真的很不错 有一些词我都读不下来==楼主功力肯定很好
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xuzhipiao1: 金币+8, 有帮助, 谢谢,替别人发帖,不过这几天他已经考试了,但愿他能过 2012-10-05 17:43:07
学习了,看了第一篇,总觉得没有切合What do you think is the future development of the interent?这个主题,且感觉到罗列的例子太多了。
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3楼: Originally posted by _锦瑟薇薇 at 2012-10-04 14:20:15
写的真的很不错 有一些词我都读不下来==楼主功力肯定很好

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xuzhipiao1: 金币+5, 有帮助, 谢谢你 2012-10-14 10:21:52
有几个错误的单词哦~~~但是总体还是挺通顺的~~楼主很厉害~~
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