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Justonestand

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[交流] I like for you to be still

 

I like for you to be still:it is as through you are absent
and you hear me from far away and my voice dose not touch you
It seems as through your eyes had flown away
and it seems that a kiss had sealed your mouth
as all things are filled with my soul
your  energe from the things,fill with my soul
you are like my soul,a butterfly of dreams
and you are like the word melancholy
I like for you to be still,and you seem far away
It sounds as though you are lamenting,a butterfly cooing like a dove
And you hear me from far away ,and my voice does not reach you
Let me come to be still in your silence
And let me talk to you with your silence
That is bright like a lamp ,simple as a ring
You are like the night ,with its stillness and constellation
Your silence is that of a star ,as remount and candid
I like for you to be still: it is as though you are absent
distant and dull of sorrow ,as though you had died
One word then ,one smile ,is enough
And I'm happy ,happy that's not ture



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Justonestand: 回帖置顶 2012-09-12 10:58:23
Wow, brilliant words and very imaginative
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fungixx: 回帖置顶 2012-09-12 11:43:54
i am just wondering whether it's true the author like still~ i guess maybe he/she wants more than that~ i feel so sad


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Justonestand

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7楼: Originally posted by rchiuctw at 2012-09-12 10:44:43
Wow, brilliant words and very imaginative

sorry, i copied it, but i can't give the interlinkage, thanks for your beaautiful flower, i will write my own words if i can.
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It's a poem?
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2楼: Originally posted by li123cl at 2012-09-12 09:10:10
It's a poem?

yeah~
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4楼: Originally posted by Justonestand at 2012-09-12 09:11:12
yeah~

Nice....
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That is bright like a lamp ,simple as a ring
虽然我们走遍世界去寻找美,但是美这东西要不是存在于我们内心,就无从寻找。
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Justonestand

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8楼: Originally posted by fungixx at 2012-09-12 11:43:46
i am just wondering whether it's true the author like still~ i guess maybe he/she wants more than that~ i feel so sad

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oh, i can't hear your music~~~After certified, i know the author herself likes still when she meets affection or love~~
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