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meimeichen

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[求助] 急请大家帮帮忙,看看这个句子怎么修改,说有语病,自己看不出来了!

急请大家帮帮忙,看看这个句子怎么修改,说有语病,自己看不出来了!
The expression of H-FABP and A-FABP gene mRNA both exhibited a developmental increase in LD tissue (P<0.05), and reached a peak at 50 kg and 70 kg of BW in Laiwu and Lulai Black pig, respectively. However, the expression of H-FABP and A-FABP gene in liver tissue did not show any significant variations in the two breeds.
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myday827

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sltmac: 金币+1 2012-08-15 09:54:20
Mally89: 金币+5 2012-09-25 14:51:55
Mally89: 代为lz发放,感谢应助!~ 2012-09-25 14:52:08
基因表达被抑制,were exhibited。
而且既然是gene的为什么后面还是mrna?应该是expreesion of 。。。gene 就可以了,或者加上into mRNA level。
被动式是关键错误。
最好respectively 加在BW 后面。
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sltmac: 金币+1 2012-08-15 09:54:25
Mally89: 金币+5, 代为lz发放,感谢应助!~ 2012-09-25 14:52:03
The expression of H-FABP and A-FABP gene mRNA exhibited a developmental increase in LD tissue (P<0.05), which reached a peak at 50 kg and 70 kg of BW in Laiwu and Lulai Black pig respectively. However, the expression of H-FABP and A-FABP gene in liver tissue did not show any significant variations in the two breeds.
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