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商椹

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[求助] 求批改我的IBT作文,感激不尽

why attend to college or university???

The more skilled person required from society development, the more university come out. The university’s duty is responsible for rearing talented people. The most talented people usually reformed in university. Therefore the people who
want to succeed in future had better to attend college or university for increasing new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge.

The one reason that attends to university could be increase new experiences. It’s because that the verities of wonderful courses only present in university. The fresh courses, not similarly sciences, was experienced bind to your major subject will trigger more interdisciplinary inspirations or ideas. Those novel experiences most benefit from attend to university. But yet the rarely birds somebody may considered. According to the experience from history, only release the hinder of think-tank, those people just prefect her ability.

The other reason that attends to university is career preparation. To be more specific, the large mount of people graduated from school regular to swarm into fierce society every year. The educated people more suitable for societies meet yet. The career preparation become more popular goal absorb people attends to university. For instance, my father fails to educate since her childhood and the work chances always behind her for non-similar technical. After three months training in machine of repair department in WuHan university. He successful takes a consideration position from an international assembling corporation.

The final reason that attend to college could be increases your knowledge. The schools have a large number of intellectual resources: the professors who professional in herself fields, the last printed books and scholar papers, updated lecture. As a learner make goal also required those mountainous of valuable resources from college. Some may question that the society is really resources: to meet the different background of people experienced verity of local cultures, used the knowledge to transform into production, practice your every potential ability. Compare to society, the college provide more professional conductions, much efficiently and activity spaces for people who want to made professional in study.

The all reasons that people who attend to university were take advantage of increasing new experiences, career preparation and build-up knowledge. Attend to university are worth investment for future. Not only increasing people’s experiences, but also starting your knowledge journal. Under the no circumstances should we attend to university.
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商椹

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4楼: Originally posted by willton at 2012-06-30 23:38:33
到处都是基本的语法错误,建议楼主多看看英文杂志,这状态是别指望靠写作拿高分了

基本的语法错误,能不能指点一下哦。谢谢。努力
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商椹

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好像是人不多啊。
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2楼2012-06-30 13:44:28
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benovence

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天道酬勤

第一句话 不知道啥意思。
为理想而奋斗!
3楼2012-06-30 18:44:40
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willton

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到处都是基本的语法错误,建议楼主多看看英文杂志,这状态是别指望靠写作拿高分了

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