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Justonestand

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[交流] 【Weekly topic】Dream

    Everyone has a dream,so does she.She never dreams of becoming beautiful because she knows beauty is something she won't have. Her dream is simple,that is becoming a teacher.She came from a poor family of several children and the best thing that her parents could give them was a good education. She hopes she could have enough knowledge which would bring her a good job in a high school. But of course it is difficult to find a good job.
    But she still decided to went to a normal university to study further. But she failed her university entrance exam, she was very sad. At that time, what she could do was study hard again, and hoped the next year she could pass the exam. Finally, she succeeded, she was enrolled in a good normal university. To her disappoint, her major was changed because her grades was low. But in order to  achieve her dream, she didn't give up. She studied harder and harder, she became one of the top shudents in her class, and got the scholarship. That encouraged her,so she bigan to find a part-time job as a teacher assistant in an English training school. After five months' studying and training, she was chosen as an English teacher in that school(still part-time job),she was very excited, and worked hard and careful.A year later, she became one of the outstanding teachers in their training school.However, that's not enough good to work as a teacher,she should study further,so she bigan to pursue a master degree,took part in the postgraduate entrance exams.
    Now, she has passed the exam,but she still works hard because she wants to be a university teacher.Having achieved one dream,she sets out to achieve others. Dreamer should struggling for their dreams, no matter what the pains are.
(Hope everyone checks out my grammar problems or other problems. By the way, what's your dream?)


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shuixian2009: 金币+1, A great post 2012-06-23 14:44:34
you did a good job
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4楼: Originally posted by seagrove at 2012-06-22 22:27:45
you did a good job

thank you
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0813010040: 金币+3, Your English is pretty good too.And your English is idiomatic.Learn from you.hehe~~Lovely girl, good night and have a nice weekend and festival.:arm::arm: 2012-06-22 23:35:26
Hi, I think your English is pretty good.

Just found a minor mistake: "that not enough good to work as a teacher"
Should it be "that's not enough good to work as a teacher"?

You did really an excellent job, and I'd like to learn from you.  *^_^*

Someone who has a dream and works hard for realizing it step by step is really worth being appriciated and admired. Thanks for your excellent post and point, and by the way, welcome here to post and communicate more~~

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6楼: Originally posted by witch_girl at 2012-06-22 22:48:30
Hi, I think your English is pretty good.

Just found a minor mistake: "that not enough good to work as a teacher"
Should it be "that's not enough good to work as a teacher& ...

Thank you!Hope we make progress together
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7楼: Originally posted by Justonestand at 2012-06-22 22:52:57
Thank you!Hope we make progress together...

Nice. Yes, make progress together. We won't be alone in our progress since there are some accompanists~~

Now my dream, or maybe should be called as a goal which is more exactly, is to adjust myself to try to be professional on work, as well as improve my cooking skills.

Add oil~
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shuixian2009: 金币+1, Fightting for the dream and you alway are great 2012-06-23 14:46:18
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8楼: Originally posted by witch_girl at 2012-06-22 23:17:27
Nice. Yes, make progress together. We won't be alone in our progress since there are some accompanists~~

Now my dream, or maybe should be called as a goal which is more exactly, is to adjust mys ...

I also want to make progress together with you two.

Fightting for your dream and enjoy your process.

+ oil

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9楼: Originally posted by 0813010040 at 2012-06-22 23:39:12
I also want to make progress together with you two.

Fightting for your dream and enjoy your process.

+ oil ...

Nice.

+ oil
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