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huihua123

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[求助] 求高手修正英语摘要。 谢谢!

求真正英语高手翻译摘要,由于本人最近翻译摘要用了大量时间,但是效果很差。还被批评,找了些同学帮助,也是收效甚微,特求助高手!

之前发过2此帖子,效果一般,关键词没错,句法也没错,主要是句式太简单,求修饰润色成有点难度的句子!可以参考一下前几次的帖子,附地址如下:
https://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=4418155
https://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=4395647

求助内容:
Yukawa势能函数在模拟简单流体、胶体悬浮液方面有着广泛的应用。对Yukawa流体的密度泛函理论研究已经取得了很大进展,同时基于Yukawa势能函数的模型体系已成为研究热点,近年来备受关注。本文应用密度泛函理论研究了硬核Yukawa流体中胶体粒子间耗尽势。


以下是之前写的简单的句子,求修正:
Yukawa potential energy function has universal application, which is used for the simulation of simple fluids and colloidal suspensions. As a result of Yukawa potential energy function's model system has become a hot spot, it has concerned us in recent years that the Yukawa fluids density functional theory research had made great progress. This paper takes the density functional theory study on hard core Yukawa depletion potential colloidal particles in the fluid.
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huihua123: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, 还有一段文字,求翻译! 2012-04-27 15:55:57
huihua123: 金币+40 2012-04-30 08:30:54
Yukawa potential function in the simulation of simple fluid, colloidal suspensions is widely used. The Yukawa fluid density functional theory research has made great progress, at the same time, based on the Yukawa potential function model system has become a hot research topic, has attracted much attention in recent years. In this paper the application of density functional theory study with hardcore Yukawa fluid depletion potential of colloidal particles.
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2楼: Originally posted by favor_999 at 2012-04-27 11:04:38:
Yukawa potential function in the simulation of simple fluid, colloidal suspensions is widely used. The Yukawa fluid density functional theory research has made great progress, at the same time, bas ...

麻烦您再给修改一下的这个句式:  

耗尽作用是胶体系统研究中的一个重要方面,其实质是统计力学中的熵作用。胶体之间的熵作用广泛存在于化学和生物体系中,研究胶体之间的熵作用对探索胶体粒子的聚集态结构有积极意义。本文在统计力学框架下应用密度泛函理论构建体系Helmholtz自由能的密度泛函表达式,在简单流体的密度泛函方法中,介绍了局域密度近似、加权密度近似和Rosenfeld的基本度量理论,并在相关文献基础上研究了胶体粒子间的耗尽势,对相关的影响因素予以分析。

Depletion force is an important function in colloidal system which is in the statistical mechanics. The effect of entropy exists throughout the whole system of chemistry and biology and has a promotion to the exploration of colloidal particles aggregation structure. We apply Density Functional Theory(DFT) to set up a expression of density function of Helmholtz free energy system. In simple density functional method of fluidic, we present the Local Density Approximation(LDA), weighting density approximation and Fundamental-measure theory of Rosenfeld and the depletion force of colloidal particles on related papers which at the same time makes a analysis to the related influencing factors.
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翻译的很好的话,必不吝惜金币,只求翻译到位!
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