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swllover

铁杆木虫 (著名写手)

[交流] An angel with a broken wing

Sometimes I think some boys are those angels
with a broken wing
who live in the world
just protect those kind and pure girls
from being hurt by the dark power

When the girl finds her happiness
she will forget the angel slowly
But the angel have no complainment
for he is full of kindness
while he begins to be tired at the same time

It's hard to say if the girl is the real one
but he just do what he thinks it's right
despite with some harm

[ Last edited by swllover on 2012-4-18 at 10:16 ]
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shuixian2009

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Maybe the poem tells us if girls and boys should be good and pure,then he and she will be protected by the angles with broken wings.
有时我觉得有些男孩是折翼的天使
生活在人间
只为保护善良和纯洁的女孩
免受黑暗力量的伤害

当这女孩找到她的幸福
她逐渐忘记了天使
可是天使毫无怨言
因为他充满了仁慈
此时他也感到疲惫

很难说这个女孩是否真实
他只是做他认为对的
尽管带给自己一些伤害

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yanwuliaorao

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curton: , only English, thx 2012-04-18 06:49:35
The writer is good at writing in English.

Although every word is easy, I cant't understand the poem's meaning.

A volunteer is needed to translate it in Chinese.

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5楼2012-04-18 03:34:29
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5楼: Originally posted by yanwuliaorao at 2012-04-18 03:34:29:
The writer is good at writing in English.

Although every word is easy, I cant't understand the poem's meaning.

A volunteer is needed to transit it in Chinese.

6楼2012-04-18 07:24:44
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lysrandy

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the broken wing angel may finally get hurt or hurt his girl,in the condition that he always do what he thinks it's right,without considering the girl's mind~
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