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求英语高手翻译摘要,由于本人最近翻译摘要用了3天时间仍然感觉很粗糙,特求助高手!!!不要谷歌检索,请准确翻译。应助者有不足会酌情给分,若翻译的好还可以加码,急用,希望能尽快有结果!谢谢了~为方便大家翻译,我附上自己以前翻译的一些句子和单词。

本人翻译的内容,感觉很多错,自己也看不出来。贴上来权当大家借鉴关键词。
(耗尽作用是胶体系统中的一个重要研究对象,其理论实质是统计力学中的熵作用。胶体之间的熵作用广泛存在于化学和生物体系中,研究胶体之间的熵作用对探索胶体粒子的聚集态结构有积极意义。本文在综合国内外近年来公开发表的相关文献基础上研究了胶体粒子间的耗尽势,并对相关因素予以分析。)
(This thesis is devoted to study the depletion force in colloidal suspension systems, which is called the entropy interaction in      existing       广泛 in chemical and biological systems. Therefore, the study of the entropy interaction in the colloidal particles has some  significance in analysising the aggregation structure of colloid particles. On the basis of relative published literatures in recent years, this paper studies and analyzes some factors that influence the depletion force in colloidal systems.)

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在统计力学中的硬球模型是具有代表性的一类胶体模型,胶体粒子之间存在排斥体积作用。基于Yukawa势能函数的模型体系已成为研究热点。耗尽作用是胶体系统中的一个重要研究作用,其实质是统计力学中的熵作用。胶体之间的熵作用广泛存在于化学和生物体系中,研究胶体之间的熵作用对探索胶体粒子的聚集态结构有积极意义。在统计力学框架下应用密度泛函理论构建体系Helmholtz自由能的密度泛函表达式,在简单流体的密度泛函方法中,介绍了局域密度近似、加权密度近似和Rosenfeld的基本度量理论,并在相关文献基础上研究了胶体粒子间的耗尽势,对相关的影响因素予以分析。

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huihua123: 金币+80, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 及时快速的反馈,修改的和替换的也看了,都不错,感谢! 2012-04-17 15:45:18
Hard-sphere model is a kind of typical colloidal model in statistical mechanics existing in excluded-volume effect between colloidal particles. Nowadays, the hotspot of research is model system based on Yukawa potential function. Depletion force is an important function in colloidal system which is the in statistical mechanics. The effect of entropy exists throughout the whole system of chemistry and biology that has a positive significance to the exploration of colloidal particles aggregation structure. We apply DFT(Density Functional Theory) to setting up a expression of density function of Helmholtz free energy system. In simple density functional method of fluidic, we introduce the basic measurement theory of LDA(Local Density Approximation), weighting density approximation and Rosenfeld and the depletion force of colloidal particles on related papers which at the same time makes a analysis to the related influencing factor.
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本文研究了胶体悬浮系统的排空力,即广泛应用与生化系统的熵作用。因此,熵作用在胶体粒子中的应用的研究对于胶体粒子聚集结构的分析有重要的意义。基于近几年相关文献的的研究,本文主要对影响胶体系统的排空力的一些因素做出了进一步的研究和分析。
我要的幸福,在不远处!
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3楼: Originally posted by paula365 at 2012-04-17 11:30:39:
本文研究了胶体悬浮系统的排空力,即广泛应用与生化系统的熵作用。因此,熵作用在胶体粒子中的应用的研究对于胶体粒子聚集结构的分析有重要的意义。基于近几年相关文献的的研究,本文主要对影响胶体系统的排空力的 ...

翻译完了  才发现 是汉译英  我把楼主的英文汉译了一遍
我要的幸福,在不远处!
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2楼: Originally posted by 769020087 at 2012-04-17 11:17:32:
Hard-sphere model is a kind of typical colloidal model in statistical mechanics existing in excluded-volume effect between colloidal particles. Nowadays, the hotspot of research is model system bas ...

we introduce the basic measurement theory of LDA(Local Density Approximation), weighting density approximation and Rosenfeld and the depletion force of colloidal particles on related papers which at the same time makes a analysis to the related influencing factor.
1。  Rosenfeld的基本度量理论没有写出来吧,能否润色一下啊

2. has a positive significance 能否换一个说法 啊

3. the related influencing factor.是否需要复数啊?
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4楼: Originally posted by paula365 at 2012-04-17 11:32:25:
翻译完了  才发现 是汉译英  我把楼主的英文汉译了一遍

英语专业的高人啊,能否帮忙润色一下这句话啊,,另有重谢啊

第1章:绪论。介绍软物质物理领域中的胶体系统的基本研究情况,对耗尽作用进行了简要说明。从统计力学角度介绍密度泛函理论和密度分布函数等相关概念,同时介绍了密度泛函理论的研究现状。
The first chapter: Summary,  a brief introduction in colloidal systems in the soft matter physics research is 被介绍,被引入,   
mainly focusing on the depletion interaction. On the point of statistics, the first chapter contains illustrations and descriptions of the density functional theory and the density distribution function and other related concepts. (Also, the development of density functional theory, current status and applications are outlined in this paper. 同时介绍了密度泛函理论的研究现状。。)最后这句话总感觉不对,
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We introduce the LDA(Local Density Approximation), weighting density approximation and basic measurement theory of Rosenfeld and the depletion force of colloidal particles on related papers which at the same time makes a analysis to the related influencing factor.
factor需要复数,改成factors。楼主说的积极意义换个说法...怎么个换法?
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7楼: Originally posted by 769020087 at 2012-04-17 14:55:40:
We introduce the LDA(Local Density Approximation), weighting density approximation and basic measurement theory of Rosenfeld and the depletion force of colloidal particles on related papers which a ...

has a positive significance 同义替换一下这个词组,用哪个好一点?
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The first chapter: Summary. A brief description of depletion interaction and basic research conditions of colloidal systems in the field of soft substance physics has been introduced in this chapter. What’s more, we also introduce the related concepts of density functional theory and density distribution function from the point of view of statistical mechanics, which at same time introduce the research condition of density functional theory nowadays.
同义词组...我看看!
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9楼: Originally posted by 769020087 at 2012-04-17 15:07:51:
The first chapter: Summary. A brief description of depletion interaction and basic research conditions of colloidal systems in the field of soft substance physics has been introduced in this chapte ...

introduce 这个词的出现频率太高了,能否多换几个词呢?我原来也是都用的introduce ,但是被老师全盘否定了。换换句式或者别的方法都行,不用一一对应的翻译,意义一样就行。

具有推动作用也可以不错,用英语在上面的句子里怎么说啊?
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