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之前给老外morrison写了一封e-mail要细胞，他跟我没问题的，但我必须要问一下这个细胞系的创建者giovanini，他说For me its not a problem, but you would have to ask Marco Giovannini because he originally made the cell lines and I am bound to his MTA. If he does not answer you then get back into contact with me. 我给那个叫giovanini的老外写了几封，没回我，估计是不想给我或太忙不想麻烦。现在我要给老外morrison写封信向他要，我拟写了一封，希望大家提提意见。 大致表达的中文意思：尊敬的morrison 之前我写email给你问你要细胞，我按你的要求已经写了好几封e-mail给giovanini了，但是他可能太忙了或者其他原因，没回我。这个细胞系对我们的研究很重要，希望morrison 慷慨的帮助我们。我和我的导师经常探讨morrison 先生的文章，给我们的科研带来很多启迪，欢迎morrion来我们的耳研所。如果需要我们另外做什么的，告诉我们,谢谢。 Dear morrison I had previous writen to you for exploring the possibility of XX cell lines,and I have followed your suggestion to contact with Dr.giovanini, yet he is too busy to reply me.I don't know if there are else reasons. The cell lines are very important for our study, I really hope that professor morrison could help me . I and my director often discuss on your papers ,which bring us inspiration and enlighten our way toward success .Welcome to our ear institue. if there is something else I am bound to do, please tell me . Thanks Hongsai Chen |
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昵称让人头疼: 金币+8, 外语EPI+1, 这样的信，Prof.是乐意看到的！ 2012-05-24 21:41:47
昵称让人头疼: 金币+8, 外语EPI+1, 这样的信，Prof.是乐意看到的！ 2012-05-24 21:41:47
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您的译文存在的问题比较多，其中最大的一个问题就是表述过于中文化。 不能有效表达您在中文中想要传达的意思。 甚至于由于口吻过于生硬，会给人没有礼貌的印象。 我按照您的中文表述重新撰写了一封邮件，希望对您有帮助。 Dear Morrison， Thanks for your last email regarding the request of XX cell lines（英文书信，如果之前有收到回复，一定要礼貌性的进行感谢，最好能够同时提示之前的通信内容）. Following your suggestion, I have been trying to get in touch with Dr.giovanini and still have not received any response yet. （没有必要说也许他很忙之类的主观判断） The professors and me in our centre are all big fans of your work, which has inspired us greatly with respect to our researches. （表示倾慕，这里用了fans，他的工作的粉丝，马屁拍的稍微活泼了一些，也可以改为比较中庸的admire之类的词汇）We hope that you could help us acquire the cell lines, which is of great value for our research in the future. （点明主旨） Should you have any problems please let me know. Thanks and warmest regards， （礼貌性的感谢和祝福，这里没必要使用sincerely yours之类的表述） Hongsai Chen |
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ailing2023: 金币+1, thank you for your enthusiastic help\(^o^)/~ 2012-04-17 09:58:34
ailing2023: 金币+1, thank you for your enthusiastic help\(^o^)/~ 2012-04-17 09:58:34
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Dear morrison, I have previously written to you for exploring the possibility of XX cell lines,and I have followed your suggestion to contact with Dr.giovanini, he may be too busy to reply me. The cell lines are very important for our study, I really hope that you could help us. My director and I often discuss on your papers, which bring us inspiration and enlighten our way toward success. Welcome to our ear institue any time convenient for you. I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter. Yours sincerely, Hongsai Chen |
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昵称让人头疼: 金币+2, 还需要再修改一下，感谢应助 2012-04-17 19:42:35
昵称让人头疼: 金币+2, 还需要再修改一下，感谢应助 2012-04-17 19:42:35
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我楼上的那个改改 第二段 The cell lines are very important for my study.I really hope that you could help me. My director and I often discuss your theses , which bring me inspiration and enlighten my way toward success. Welcome to our ear institue at any time convenient for you. Thank you for your generous help . Yours sincerely, Hongsai Chen |
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suplee: 金币+1, thanks for your help 2012-04-19 11:54:06
古可ぷ: 金币+3, thanks 2012-04-19 23:36:18
suplee: 金币+1, thanks for your help 2012-04-19 11:54:06
古可ぷ: 金币+3, thanks 2012-04-19 23:36:18
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Dear Morrison, Thank you for your quick reply and suggestion. According to your suggestion, I contacted Dr. Giovanini on 10 Match. More than twenty days has passed, but I have n’t received his reply till now. The cell lines are very important for our study, I really need your help. I would appreciate it if you can give me some cells. Yours sincerely, Hongsai Chen |
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etin: 金币+1, 谢谢应助，欢迎常来外语版交流 2012-04-21 10:29:21
etin: 金币+1, 谢谢应助，欢迎常来外语版交流 2012-04-21 10:29:21
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