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gongyiweimu

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[交流] The girl what I should say to you

Meeting you was fate
Becoming your friend was a choice
but falling in love with you was beyond my control

When I come across you,
I know I fall in love with you,
But you have boyfriend

When I know you return to be a single
I don't know I still love you
Because the distance between us become longer

As we talk on internet
I failed to pursuit another girl
So I could not answer to you

When you tell me you should come here
I am happy and worry
Sadden with the weather change

Heard that you was sick
I want to go to see you
But I don't know what I can say to you by phone

Then we are still friend
We extend greetings to each other  
But we all keep silent

When you say should come
On April 1 and at the last hour
Surprised and plesant

You come as scheduled
I am happy with you
You don't complain  even if I take you go wrong.

When you say you should travel far
I hope I should company with you
So I say you could not travel lonely

You will go to  other place
I only bless you safe
Sorry that I cannot accompany you now

The girl
when you leave
I know I still love you

No matter how far away from us
No matter how much we are friendly
But I don't know how to speak to you
and what I should say to you.

[ Last edited by gongyiweimu on 2012-4-13 at 23:05 ]
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a good poem. this beautiful thing will not happen if it is not a true love
Bless you!
9楼2012-04-12 09:02:09
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curton: 金币+3, That you love her and she loves you is the best love. 2012-04-11 22:32:53
That you love her and she loves you is the best love.
I think you can tell her the feelings in your heart.
Don't miss the opportunity to express your love.
Best wishes.
告别绝望 告别风中的山谷 哭是一种幸福
5楼2012-04-11 20:43:31
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curton: , only english,thx 2012-04-11 22:33:07
第三段第三句是不是between??
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