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gongyiweimu

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[交流] Love a Girl

Love a girl when I see you at know at  first glance.
But you had boyfriend who is my friend.
With heaving a sigh
Bless you happy.

I was  pleased When
I heard that you had broken up with him from you.
But I hope that you would make peace.
Then I heard the bad message.

I didn't know what love was.
When I found a girl who I admire
I had professed to her.
Then I read that  even love  you also  can't hurry

There was a chance.
I don't want to make use of an opportunity to tell you that I love you.
At that time I didn't  why I love you.
But I am happy with you.

Love you with reason that I love your temperament
But I cannot keep you accompany when you travel
May I know you also love me
But I would not match with you now.

The girl who I love
Bless you happy and safe
When I will have actual strength
I hope you should be a single.
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The girl who I love
Bless you happy and safe
When I will have actual strength
I hope you should be a single.
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very good work

very good poem
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“Love you more than I can say”
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8楼: Originally posted by poyoro at 2012-04-11 01:09:17:
POETRY?

No ,only what I want to say.
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