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flys111

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[交流] 英语大牛们帮我改改这几个句子吧!!~~

"Continuous increase of x from 0.75 to 2.25, the quantity of
CuO phase increased also which indicated CuxCo3-xO4 (x>0.75) was the mixtures of different CuxCo3-xO4 (x<1) and CuO"
"Continuous increase of the temperature to 723 K, their Hgo oxidation ability all decreased which might be attributed to the decomposition of adsorbed oxidized mercury"
"Secondly, CuO existing in CuxCo3-xO4 could firstly react with SO2 to protect the Hgo oxidation active centre".
Please revise such phrases/sentences for grammar and clarity.

投到国外的一篇文章,编辑认为这几句有语病,大牛们看看哪里有问题?该怎么改阿,谢了,呵呵!!~~~
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zyy816

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neso124(金币+1):thanks !!http://emuch.net/bbs/misc.php?action=karma&fid=126&tid=435610&pid=3322233&score=1
with continuous increase of x from 0.75 to 2.25, the quantity of
CuO phase increased. it indicated that the CuxCo3-xO4 (x>0.75) was  mixtures of different CuxCo3-xO4 (x<1) and CuO.
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flys111

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谢谢金虫了!!~~
英语不好写英文文章真费劲啊
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