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With the rapid development of economy, and social progress and the heavy demand of intellectuals, colleges or universities have been continually expanding enrollment in recent years. At the same time, there are some odd phenomenons. For example, after graduating from college, many students work at jobs which have nothing to do with what they have studied at school. What do you think may be the causes?
In my opinion, there is no denying that many reasons cause the result. In the following, I will give some of the reasons. First of all, from the view of the society, owing to the increasingly social competition and the enormously living pressure, some students may feel obliged to take a job that one can do it without need any college knowledge in order to make their livings. Secondly, from the viewpoint of the universities, their structure of curriculum has not made the adjustment to the society industrial development. They attach great importance to students¡¯ test scores while ignoring to pay attention to the cultivation of student¡¯s capability. Finally, as far as students are concerned, they may have no interesting in the major that their parents choose carefully for them. In the result, they obtain too less professional knowledge to engage in related work.
In a word, it is high time that the universities took effective measures to direct their educational goal from exam-oriented education to education for all-round development and the students paid more attention to the learning of all kinds of knowledge to meet the needs of society. Only by this way can students get a professional job that they have the opportunity to make full use of the vocational knowledge which they have acquired in the college.

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curton(ESEPI+1): xiaodingzi, it is a good idea 2012-03-13 08:36:47
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2.some students may oblige to take a job...be obliged
3.Secondly, forthe viewpoint of the universities...from
4.made the adjustment along with the society industrial development.... to
5.they may have no interestingn the major that their parents choose carefully for them...
6.Only by this way can students get a rewarding job that make full use of the professional knowledge....

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7Â¥: Originally posted by wine0431 at 2012-03-11 22:28:18:
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4Â¥: Originally posted by wine0431 at 2012-03-11 22:25:22:
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5Â¥: Originally posted by zyy880326 at 2012-03-11 22:26:35:
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curton(½ð±Ò+1): A 2012-03-11 22:47:54
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curton(½ð±Ò+1): help them to get what they really need. 2012-03-13 08:37:16
maybe goals of students are so differnt that the university should set differnt standards for each one, and help them to get what they really need.
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