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石油树脂是较为稳定的精细化工产品,作为化工原料广泛应用于粘合剂、涂料、橡胶等行业,在国家经济发展中占有重要的地位。本文结合国际、国内石油树脂现状及发展趋势,运用现代市场营销理论,对大庆华科公司的企业内部现状进行了描述,并运用现代市场营销理论和波特五力模型,对其所处的产业竞争对手、供应商、销售商、潜在加入竞争者、替代品等市场因素进行了研究分析。
Petroleum resin is relatively stable fine chemical products, which are widely used in adhesives, paint, rubber and other industries as chemical raw materials combined with international, domestic situation and development trend of petroleum resin, the use of modern marketing theory, firstly ,DaqingHuake company internal status of the description, and the use of modern marketing theory and the Potter five forces model on the industry competitors, suppliers, vendors, potential entrants, substitute industry factors were studied and analyzed, through the enterprise marketing organization, marketing ability, financial resources, technology and manufacturing capacity, internal environment analysis, combining with the product demand characteristics, existing competitors, entry of new competitors, alternative products, resources for the external influence factors such as the deep analysis and research.
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ankang276(金币+5): 2011-12-03 21:18:55
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2楼: Originally posted by terry_well at 2011-12-01 01:11:44:
石油树脂是较为稳定的精细化工产品,作为化工原料广泛应用于粘合剂、涂料、橡胶等行业,在国家经济发展中占有重要的地位。本文结合国际、国内石油树脂现状及发展趋势,运用现代市场营销理论,对大庆华科公司的企 ...

如果按第一句中蓝色部分删掉的话,第一句就没有谓语了。
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爱与雨下(金币+1): 2011-12-01 08:52:38
ankang276(金币+30, 翻译EPI+1): 2011-12-03 21:17:57
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1楼: Originally posted by ankang276 at 2011-11-24 20:30:50:
石油树脂是较为稳定的精细化工产品,作为化工原料广泛应用于粘合剂、涂料、橡胶等行业,在国家经济发展中占有重要的地位。本文结合国际、国内石油树脂现状及发展趋势,运用现代市场营销理论,对大庆华科公司的企业 ...

石油树脂是较为稳定的精细化工产品,作为化工原料广泛应用于粘合剂、涂料、橡胶等行业,在国家经济发展中占有重要的地位。本文结合国际、国内石油树脂现状及发展趋势,运用现代市场营销理论,对大庆华科公司的企业内部现状进行了描述,并运用现代市场营销理论和波特五力模型,对其所处的产业竞争对手、供应商、销售商、潜在加入竞争者、替代品等市场因素进行了研究分析。
Petroleum resin, as one of the relatively stable fine chemical products, is widely used in adhesives, paint, rubber and some other industrial products, such as chemical raw materials. Based on  current situation and development trends of petroleum resin, the present conditions in DaqingHuake company was analyzed in detail by using modern marketing theory. At the same time, according to the modern marketing theory and the Potter five forces model, its potential industrial competitors, suppliers, vendors, potential entrants, substitute industry factors were also studied and analyzed.

原文比较短,英文部分有多余。仅供参考。
签名:英文名“Terry”,EC版专用;中文名“浆糊哥”,灌水专用,谢谢合作!
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as one of the relatively stable fine chemical products只是插入语以补充说明主语性质,谓语是 is used (可改为could be widely used) ,是被动语态。
签名:英文名“Terry”,EC版专用;中文名“浆糊哥”,灌水专用,谢谢合作!
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ankang276(金币+5): 2011-12-03 21:19:05
蓝色部分不是删掉的,是我有改动的地方。
签名:英文名“Terry”,EC版专用;中文名“浆糊哥”,灌水专用,谢谢合作!
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