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21楼2011-11-01 09:50:50
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cctv123abc

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= Sub-headings in lines 224, 236, 246, 262, 273, 283, 294 must be deleted.
= Lines 305-399 must be deleted because they are an unusual, inflated and disordered repetition of the same sentences already expressed in previous sections; they still contain at least 12 big flaws; the citations present here should be deleted from the References list, except when already cited in other parts of the text. Exception is made for lines 320-328 that should be maintained as a part of the R&D section, in order to comment figure 7.
将results部分的所有副标题去掉,
然后删掉discussion部分(除320-328行),意思就是合并写,哎,死马当活马医
22楼2011-11-01 10:17:23
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visitor958

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19楼: Originally posted by cctv123abc at 2011-11-01 09:44:20:
大家帮我分析分析吧
Lines 305-399 must be deleted because they are an unusual, inflated and disordered repetition of the same sentences already expressed in previous sections; they still contain at ...

就猜有重复。这么详细的意见,照办就行了。
23楼2011-11-01 10:27:00
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cctv123abc

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23楼: Originally posted by visitor958 at 2011-11-01 10:27:00:
就猜有重复。这么详细的意见,照办就行了。

谢谢了,
如果是直接照他说的删掉那几十行,剩下320-328行,再去掉results中的副标题,将results和discussion合并,倒也轻松,今天就可以再上传,
但是这次小改给了我2个月的修改时间,12月31截止; 远远超过上次大改给予的时间(20天),所以隐隐约约还能感觉到要将原先的discussion的某些部分很好的融入results中.
系统不让追加金币了,再次感谢
24楼2011-11-01 11:02:39
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pppp1296

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按照编辑说的做没错,最重要的是编辑满意,其他一切都OK
25楼2011-11-01 11:58:19
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加油吧
26楼2011-11-02 07:05:55
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