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[½»Á÷] I want to learn english well

Today is the first time for me to write something in this forum.I am write so carefull and nervous.I love this plate---English cafe. I wish i could write something erveyday in my next daily life .
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phu_grassman(½ð±Ò+1): Thanks for your correcting. 2011-10-18 09:13:07
small mistakes in your post: " I am write so carefull and nervous" ,¡®write¡¯ should be ¡° writing ¡±, "careful and nervous" should be "carefully and nervously", my suggest is "i am writing so carefully that i feel a little nervous"
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witch_girl(½ð±Ò+1): nice girl~ 2011-10-14 18:47:21
it is difficult to insist one thing
u say i love english ,so peresit it and write something everyday ,u may make progress and be happy

my english is so bad, let-s begin together
4Â¥2011-10-14 11:36:01
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your English is so nice.Best wishes
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1Â¥: Originally posted by 782375103 at 2011-10-14 11:32:03:
Today is the first time for me to write something in this forum.I am write so carefull and nervous.I love this plate---English cafe. I wish i could write something erveyday in my next daily life .
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I t will be fine after your try.
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