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zhangwz998

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[资源] 我写的英文综述文章的审稿意见

Ms. Ref. No.: ******
Title: ******
Materials Science and Engineering B

Dear Dr. ******,

Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision.  

For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below.

Reviewer #1: This work proposes an extensive review on micromulsion-based methods for the synthesis of Ag nanoparticles. As such, the matter is of interest, however the paper suffers for two serious limits:
1)        the overall quality of the English language is rather poor;
2)        some Figures must be selected from previous literature to discuss also the synthesis of anisotropically shaped Ag nanoparticles (there are several examples published), which has been largely overlooked throughout the paper.
Once the above concerns are fully addressed, the manuscript could be accepted for publication in this journal.

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How about the second reviewer's command?
9楼2007-01-19 13:48:23
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第一个是讲你的英文写作水平还需提高;
第二个是说可以从参考文献中选择几个有代表意义的图来说明问题。
总之,很不错了,要知道综述被接收还是不容易的,恭喜了。
2楼2006-12-13 19:48:28
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goldjay

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还有很长的路要走
4楼2006-12-13 23:12:37
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