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dashuang26

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[求助] 审稿意见似乎不是很严重 状态是return for major rewriting 是怎么回事?

审稿意见回来:
Dear Mr. We now have referees' comments on the above paper.  I am pleased to tell you that the work is of interest, but regret to say that the paper is not considered suitable in its present form for publication.  The reasons are detailed in the comments below.  
You will see that a number of general and specific points are mentioned which necessitate extensive rewriting of the paper.  
Please consider how you wish to proceed. If you are able to revise the paper extensively, to deal in full with all the points mentioned, we shall be willing to consider the position further.  

Reviewer #1: The paper addresses a real subject and has been revised to a reasonable length for the subject matter. Other papers have looked at materials properties (e.g. ref [5]), but this paper considers different materials and concentrates in greater detail on microstructure. Figures are generally good and the paper is appropriately referenced.
However, for publication the standard of language must be improved clarified in all parts of the paper and the Conclusions should include not just what changes in properties occur but also WHY they occur.

稿件状态是return for major rewriting

求教:
1.You will see that a number of general and specific points are mentioned which necessitate extensive rewriting of the paper. ---指代的是 我将在什么地方看到需要重修的地方?
2.Other papers have looked at materials properties (e.g. ref [5]), but this paper considers different materials and concentrates in greater detail on microstructure.是什么意思呢?是在正面评述论文,还是暗示我要作什么修改呢?
3.审稿意见似乎不是很严重,而状态是return for major rewriting,是什么原因呢?仅仅是因为语言问题,还是有其他?

新手上路,心中忐忑,请求高手解惑!多谢了!
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yaoyao145

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dashuang26(金币+2): 谢谢你! 2011-10-10 16:28:34
the Conclusions should include not just what changes in properties occur but also WHY they occur. 这句才是关键 讨论部分应当重写 不仅仅包括哪些特性发生了变化 还应该解释一下为什么会发生这样的变化
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dashuang26

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2楼: Originally posted by yaoyao145 at 2011-10-10 15:57:52:
the Conclusions should include not just what changes in properties occur but also WHY they occur. 这句才是关键 讨论部分应当重写 不仅仅包括哪些特性发生了变化 还应该解释一下为什么会发生这样的变化

谢谢您,这句话是否说的是Conclusions 部分呢 因为我结论部分只写了结果,没有写原因?
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yaoyao145

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dashuang26(金币+2): THANK YOU 2011-10-13 20:30:51
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3楼: Originally posted by dashuang26 at 2011-10-10 16:04:44:
谢谢您,这句话是否说的是Conclusions 部分呢 因为我结论部分只写了结果,没有写原因?

是的 就是让你解释原因
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dashuang26

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4楼: Originally posted by yaoyao145 at 2011-10-10 16:25:37:
是的 就是让你解释原因

谢谢啊!把讨论里面的解释归纳下,放在结论里面应该就行了吧?
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yaoyao145

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5楼: Originally posted by dashuang26 at 2011-10-10 16:36:44:
谢谢啊!把讨论里面的解释归纳下,放在结论里面应该就行了吧?

是的 差不多就这个意思
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求教下楼主   那个文章  当时 这个状态之后怎么处理的呢?
呜呼.....
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