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[交流] 【The stories about xixi】I————The first girl in my life

好了，前言就不用英文了，我英语很差得。
大概是从高中开始，我就觉得我的经历很传奇（比较幼稚吧，都是小时候的事），所以一直想把我的故事写下来，但是每次动笔都因为懒停了下来。
上了大学，大一时英语老师随口提了几条建议，有一个每天写英语日记，我都很用心的记了下来，因为从大一起就要准备考研。
大一上学期写了一学期的英语日记，感觉到后来也没什么事好记了，于是突发奇想，从下学期开始写我的故事，用英文。没想到一下坚持了一年多。
写了以后我不知道找谁去改，因为高中的朋友大多因为我的性格所以不想联系，找老师也不好意思，一直到今年三月上了小木虫，发现了EC这个版，本来暑假就想把这些打上了，但是太懒了，暑假颓废了了一个多月。
这个学期还是因为懒，不想把这个打上来。前一段时间在棉花糖认识了小橙和小乐，发现他们都是EC的人，于是来看了看，然后发了个关于witch的帖

纯粹灌水开玩笑。
这件东西迟早要打，于是就很忽然的开始了，呵呵。
我说我对现实中的女人都没兴趣了，群里大家都在笑，其实这个是挺严肃的一件事，到了现在，我也确实是只对动漫中的女生有感觉了。
我的故事分为girls篇和boys篇，girls还差两篇就写完了，boys还没开始写
这是我今晚打上来的，girls篇第一个girl，也是最短最没波澜的一篇，最长的一篇我已经写了快一个本了，还刹不住..............
额，发上来的目的，很明确，除了和大家分享以外，主要是希望诸位高手能帮我改改，语法和词汇，我英语很差，所以希望借此提高，这也是我写回忆录的初衷，呵呵，多谢大家听我啰嗦了，正文开始：
The first girl in my life
It was said that I had a girl friend when I was in nursery school,but I could not remember the girl when my mother told me.In my memories,the time I got the first girl friend is seven when I was in kindergarten.She was named ZQ,which is an usually/a normal name.
She is/was a pretty and lovely girl at seven. I used to go to her home and play with her.I even left my bag in her home sometimes and took her one_desk/deskmate?I am not sure.. for rival in love.
A matter about her always come/came to my mind.It just happened in one day after dinner.I asked my family did them know I would marry with who/who I would marry.My grandmother blurted out that ZQ...Now,in my idea/in my opinion,mind..,it's a really silly thing.
You know,it just is/it was justa friendship formed in childhood.But one year passed,when Grade.1,we weren't in same class in first Grade,and she moved house/moved away!So,we didn't contact with each other from eight.The last memory about her is/was in Grade.6.She told her friend that she and I ever were/she and me were ever good friendand,her friend laught/laughed at me.Since then,althought I always see/saw her mother,we never contact/contacted with each other....
The story about my first girl friend is ended.

I have modified some mistakes at grammer as Xixi's request,but I also have many mistakes,so if there is something wrong,please tell me

thanks a lot!

——rogueliu

错误很多吧？这是我大一下学期写的，基本还是初中水平吧？用电子词典查了很多词才写完的，呵呵，希望大家帮我改改，有什么需要改正和提高的地方
以后我会以最快的速度把其他的打上来，以后还要多依靠大家了
这是我在EC的第二贴，恩，决定常来EC了，西西我是不懂规矩，纯新人希望大家多多支持，有什么错误还请谅解包含