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[交流] 【The stories about xixi】I————The first girl in my life

好了，前言就不用英文了，我英语很差得。
大概是从高中开始，我就觉得我的经历很传奇（比较幼稚吧，都是小时候的事），所以一直想把我的故事写下来，但是每次动笔都因为懒停了下来。
上了大学，大一时英语老师随口提了几条建议，有一个每天写英语日记，我都很用心的记了下来，因为从大一起就要准备考研。
大一上学期写了一学期的英语日记，感觉到后来也没什么事好记了，于是突发奇想，从下学期开始写我的故事，用英文。没想到一下坚持了一年多。
写了以后我不知道找谁去改，因为高中的朋友大多因为我的性格所以不想联系，找老师也不好意思，一直到今年三月上了小木虫，发现了EC这个版，本来暑假就想把这些打上了，但是太懒了，暑假颓废了了一个多月。
这个学期还是因为懒，不想把这个打上来。前一段时间在棉花糖认识了小橙和小乐，发现他们都是EC的人，于是来看了看，然后发了个关于witch的帖

纯粹灌水开玩笑。
这件东西迟早要打，于是就很忽然的开始了，呵呵。
我说我对现实中的女人都没兴趣了，群里大家都在笑，其实这个是挺严肃的一件事，到了现在，我也确实是只对动漫中的女生有感觉了。
我的故事分为girls篇和boys篇，girls还差两篇就写完了，boys还没开始写
这是我今晚打上来的，girls篇第一个girl，也是最短最没波澜的一篇，最长的一篇我已经写了快一个本了，还刹不住..............
额，发上来的目的，很明确，除了和大家分享以外，主要是希望诸位高手能帮我改改，语法和词汇，我英语很差，所以希望借此提高，这也是我写回忆录的初衷，呵呵，多谢大家听我啰嗦了，正文开始：
The first girl in my life
It was said that I had a girl friend when I was in nursery school,but I could not remember the girl when my mother told me.In my memories,the time I got the first girl friend is seven when I was in kindergarten.She was named ZQ,which is an usually/a normal name.
She is/was a pretty and lovely girl at seven. I used to go to her home and play with her.I even left my bag in her home sometimes and took her one_desk/deskmate?I am not sure.. for rival in love.
A matter about her always come/came to my mind.It just happened in one day after dinner.I asked my family did them know I would marry with who/who I would marry.My grandmother blurted out that ZQ...Now,in my idea/in my opinion,mind..,it's a really silly thing.
You know,it just is/it was justa friendship formed in childhood.But one year passed,when Grade.1,we weren't in same class in first Grade,and she moved house/moved away!So,we didn't contact with each other from eight.The last memory about her is/was in Grade.6.She told her friend that she and I ever were/she and me were ever good friendand,her friend laught/laughed at me.Since then,althought I always see/saw her mother,we never contact/contacted with each other....
The story about my first girl friend is ended.

I have modified some mistakes at grammer as Xixi's request,but I also have many mistakes,so if there is something wrong,please tell me

thanks a lot!

——rogueliu

错误很多吧？这是我大一下学期写的，基本还是初中水平吧？用电子词典查了很多词才写完的，呵呵，希望大家帮我改改，有什么需要改正和提高的地方
以后我会以最快的速度把其他的打上来，以后还要多依靠大家了
这是我在EC的第二贴，恩，决定常来EC了，西西我是不懂规矩，纯新人希望大家多多支持，有什么错误还请谅解包含

[ Last edited by rogueliu on 2011-10-7 at 19:18 ]

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I always hang out with girls before primary school,they are a little older than me.
I used to bring a boy to our house to do our homework in the first grade,he sucks in study,but he writes good characters.I like to do the homework with someone,but it seemed that he just came once,i thought he didn't do homework a lot.
I played with girls and there were little boys in my memory whom i contact much with especially before junior middle school.

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