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waitingwy

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[交流] Write to a strange boy

I didn’t know who you are
But when I heard of you
She was weeping for your leaving
Because of your quit, because of her pity
Listening to her sob
Helplessly, I cannot do anything for her, and you

Although I was not familiar with you
I know you are a diligent boy
Being love with the wildlife and even the entire nature
Have never said give your pursuit up
But you did, you depart
With your impetuous and prejudiced heart
Dig one deep furrow between your dream and your present

I didn’t make acquaintance of you
Until her tears disturbed my mind
They were the tears a strong girl wept for you
So sorry for your choice, so sorry for your favorite fields
But I know the gold always shine  
Anything cannot conceal its radiance
Maybe some day
You will get mature and say like that
Never be regretful for the present choice
The way ahead is long


2011/9/22
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waitingwy(金币+2): i appreciate your value of love, but it is not related to love, but dream...she and i cannot cry for the love,heh...still thank you! 2011-09-22 20:08:13
time will cure the pain.
time will bring her another love.
forget this one, get that one.
way is long...
she can live well without anyone.
who belongs to who?
life is her own, not other's.
best wishes, she will be ok , so is he.
人活着好没意思啊
9楼2011-09-22 20:00:29
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rogueliu

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witch_girl(金币+1): nice word. :) but words are different from actions. as for the "action", time will test it. :D Best wishes~ :tiger28::tiger28: 2011-09-24 19:41:55
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1楼: Originally posted by waitingwy at 2011-09-22 19:03:09:
I didn’t know who you are
But when I heard of you
She was weeping for your leaving
Because of your quit, because of her pity
Listening to her sob
Helplessly, I cannot do anything for her, an ...

I will never give up my love.

I think he is a liitle selfish,only in my opinion.
小学课本里的三大名人:小明、小强和小红。我排第一!
5楼2011-09-22 19:14:15
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flyingsnow4

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I‘m sorry for your friend’s suffering, wish her get well soon
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waitingwy(金币+1): a little love, hehe... 2011-09-22 20:13:58
separation , is a normal thing.

it happens everywhere.

love is a strange thing, makes people laugh, makes people cry.

it is easily to be hurt.

cherish life, keep away from love.
人活着好没意思啊
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