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| 意思写好了，怎么写都感觉别扭，句式重复，帮忙整理一下，尽量不用重复句式：The cyclic voltammograms (CV) and the electrochemical impedance spectroscopy (EIS) of the working electrode were obtained in three-electrode system with metallic lithium as the reference electrode. CV was carried out at room temperature and conducted at a scan rate of 0.4mVs−1 between 0.5V and 3V..EIS was measured at an open circuit . The frequency of the impedance spectra data covered range from 100kHz to 10mHz. We used an electrochemical working station equipped with impedance modules(Su zhou, China, Risetest Instrument Co. Ltd).（最后一句想说明CV和EIS都是在仪器上测试的） |
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woai820
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星夜幽梦(金币+10, 翻译EPI+1): 签于3点：第二句里连续用了两个at读起来感觉不对，第3句开头不能用But,最后一点：不能用All of the electrochemical measurements ，电化学测试还有其他，不能用All 2011-09-17 17:04:51
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星夜幽梦(金币+10, 翻译EPI+1): 签于3点：第二句里连续用了两个at读起来感觉不对，第3句开头不能用But,最后一点：不能用All of the electrochemical measurements ，电化学测试还有其他，不能用All 2011-09-17 17:04:51
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| The cyclic voltammograms (CV) and the electrochemical impedance spectroscopy (EIS) of the working electrode were carried out in three-electrode system and metallic lithium was used as the reference electrode.The CV was carried out at room temperature at a scan rate of 0.4mVs?1 in the potential range of 0.5V to 3V. But EIS was measured at an open circuit with the frequency of the impedance spectra data between 100kHz and 10mHz. All of the electrochemical measurements were investigated by an electrochemical working station equipped with impedance modules(Su zhou, China, Risetest Instrument Co. Ltd). |
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爱与雨下(金币+1): ！！ 2011-09-18 08:36:53
星夜幽梦(金币+10): 学习了 2011-09-18 09:15:09
爱与雨下(金币+1): ！！ 2011-09-18 08:36:53
星夜幽梦(金币+10): 学习了 2011-09-18 09:15:09
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最好不要用investigated，可以用tested with，measured with, or performed with (这个最好). but never "investigated"... btw 最后一句话很多余。。hehe The cyclic voltammograms (CV) and the electrochemical impedance spectroscopy (EIS) were performed in a three-electrode system, with metallic lithium as the reference electrode. A scan rate of 0.4mVs−1 between 0.5V and 3V was chosen for the CV test at a room temperature. The applied frequency of the EIS test covered a range from 100KHz to 10MHz under an open circuit. The above electrochemical analysis were tested with an electrochemical working station with impedance modules (Su zhou, China, Risetest Instrument Co. Ltd). |
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