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[½»Á÷] Bad temper

Bad temper is exsit in any place £¬and it can be controlled by yourself  £¬when you  will make a temper for your familiy or other one £¬please wait a little to make a fece £¬which delay your emotion or stop to make atemper£¬it is not fine for your body to have it on time £¬so i hope evreyone will be happy and pleasure to enjoy your life and cherish your loved penson £¬then you fill some sufficient episode
  for your life £¬all things will be successfully¡£ok i will be away from office today£¬
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see you, bad temper is bad for health. wish all of us be happy.
2Â¥2011-09-01 16:55:34
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iam agree with you
4Â¥2011-09-01 16:57:17
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teresa9588

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u say  u will leave office today ,but now ur on line
5Â¥2011-09-01 17:58:02
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phu_grassman(½ð±Ò+2): It's no good to lose our temper, bad to ourselves as well as to the people around. 2011-09-02 08:24:18
bad temper is bad for u

we should control it and donot temper ,temper will make us lose patience ,some one will look down on us .

do ur  master,donot let it happens.if u get temper ,count 30 numbers or more then speak
6Â¥2011-09-01 18:02:57
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it's not good for our health~~~~~
7Â¥2011-09-01 19:08:38
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xdx520

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phu_grassman(½ð±Ò+1): Take a deep breath and put down our angry mood. 2011-09-02 08:24:54
i agree with you, when we is going to lose our temper, we should calm down for some minutes and i am sure the bad temper will dispear. we should cherish our loved person.
8Â¥2011-09-01 20:04:23
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WG222

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A lot of commas...
9Â¥2011-09-02 09:51:54
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coleday

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9Â¥: Originally posted by WG222 at 2011-09-02 09:51:54:
A lot of commas...

sorry for that   it is first time to write in the xiaomuchong forum ,i hope i conmunication  with each other to improve my poor english . if you have some advices for my grammer or some words ,you help me correct them and please let me know , i thank you very much .
10Â¥2011-09-02 15:04:01
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WG222

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coleday(½ð±Ò+2): Thanks for 2011-09-02 20:02:21
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10Â¥: Originally posted by coleday at 2011-09-02 15:04:01:
sorry for that   it is first time to write in the xiaomuchong forum ,i hope i conmunication  with each other to improve my poor english . if you have some advices for my grammer or some words ,you ...

Practice makes perfect.

"communication with", here the "communication" should be verb "communicate"

"Advice" is uncountable noun. There is no "advices".

not "grammer", it is "grammar"

I suggest you should put emphasis on the spelling and grammar things.
Read more.
11Â¥2011-09-02 15:43:04
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rright
12Â¥2011-09-05 08:51:26
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coleday(½ð±Ò+1):лл²ÎÓë
it is not good
13Â¥2011-09-05 09:11:09
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coleday(½ð±Ò+1):лл²ÎÓë
bad temper is bad
14Â¥2011-09-05 09:25:36
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710102909

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coleday(½ð±Ò+1):лл²ÎÓë
hope you happy
15Â¥2011-09-05 09:37:31
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coleday(½ð±Ò+1):лл²ÎÓë
bad temper is bad
19Â¥2011-09-05 12:44:41
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dbj1982

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coleday(½ð±Ò+1):лл²ÎÓë
Quick temper is my weakness.
20Â¥2011-09-05 13:59:38
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bless
22Â¥2011-09-05 14:16:26
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bless£¡
24Â¥2011-09-05 14:31:39
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sorry, mistake.
29Â¥2011-09-05 16:38:26
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Take care of yourself.
32Â¥2011-09-06 00:46:10
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coleday(½ð±Ò+1):лл²ÎÓë
I appreciate your courage to write this essay, however, truth be told, there are so many grammar flaws in this article, I don't know what I say whether harms your confidence, but you must avoid these lowclass errors in your article, or you'll be mocked by some individuals who are good at E when you communicate with them.
34Â¥2011-09-06 02:13:14
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right.
Try to calm down when you feel angry and anxious
35Â¥2011-09-06 03:51:53
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Wait please when you are in bad temper.If you control it successfully, you will be successful.
36Â¥2011-09-06 06:48:02
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Bad temple exists any conner. The key is how we contol it when it comes.
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