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waitingwy

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[交流] Thunderstorm

Lightning, like a dragon
Winded its way in the gloomy sky
With the ferocious light
Scarify the smothering night
Thunder always accompanied closely
Shouted in silence
In instant
The rain was pouring
And stirring a blast of cool wind
The wind was coming from the window
Asparagus fern bewitched
Dancing with the wind

A message flashed on the screen
A little surprise, the sudden figure
Knock at the door of memory
In the thunderstorm
Resonating together with a long night
Echoing in the cislunar
Those coincidences appeared in life
Was an arrangement given by the fate on purpose?
May be it was, a beam of light
Burning in the summer night
In this thunderstorm
You, seemed to be an old friend
Also as a person in the dream
Right here
Not far, not close
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waitingwy

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Originally posted by miracle2008 at 2011-07-23 21:27:04:
Let it break in all its fury!

so fierce!
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witch_girl

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Dancing with the wind.

sometimes, I'd rather believe that the fate arranges us to dance with the wind, keep calm and peace with the thunderstorm....
(I did just think of this sentence, in fact, which has little connection with your poem... )

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