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we need humor The humor is the important thing in our lifes,if we only know work study .....everyday and no communicate eachother,no more humor. so we would have more problems in our lifes. one day a customer murmured, "i wonder if this milk is fresh" the waiter answered,"fresh? three hours ago it was grass. so the humor can slove more problem in time . humor may suatain us in hard times and bring happinedd in everyday life. once my neighbor told me that he shaves fifty times a day, was he crazy? of course not-he is a barber. so my dear friends, remember we need humor and try to humorous in your life.next time when you in troublem don't nevrous, and deal with it in humor. 这个是六级作文么？如果是的话，楼主的作文恐怕是不及格了，建议先看看六级作文的要求和范文再自己动笔写． 整片作文比较杂乱，语法不通，而且毫无结构可言． 建议重写 还有以后不许用斑竹ＩＤ作为标题，否则删除帖子 [ Last edited by hummer on 2006-10-26 at 21:48 ] |
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