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NK_xiaoya

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[求助] 请求帮忙修改一下我的套磁信,谢谢了

相中一位老师,以下是我写给一个老师的套磁信,第一次写,不知道该写成什么样子,侧重点是什么,还希望有经验的人指导一下,我先谢谢了
Dear Dr. XX:

My name is XXX, a master student from China.

I have learned about your research from website, and I am highly interested in your research on medical imaging and image analysis on life science applications. I want to pursue my Ph.D. in your program.

With a GPA of 3.29/4, majoring in automation, I received my bachelor degree at XXUniversity (topX in China) in 2009. Two programs I had taken part in were in relation to medicine. One is the Innovative Project I joined with other 4 students as sophomores, and another is my thesis research (you can find more details in my CV). The experience makes me learn the value of some research and its applicability in some necessary fields attracts me a lot, and I am quite sincere to look for a new starting point in my research and career based on this.

Ranking top 1/38 as a master in xx, my research interest focuses on XXprocessing (more details in my CV), and I'll finish my graduate in Jan. 2012. I know that my background in XX may not be quite suitable for your group. But I am quite happy to learn some new knowledge and skills, and I believe I can master new programs/projects quite well.

Could you reconsider me as a PHD position in your lab? And if you have openings for that, I would be honored.

I attached my C.V and scanned transcript in this letter.
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NK_xiaoya(金币+4): 非常感谢 2011-07-06 10:55:56
heding(金币+2): thx for commu. 欢迎常来DIY大家庭撒!~ 2011-07-06 11:23:46
实话告诉你吧,这差不多是小木虫经典模板...我就是这么写的,收效甚微....我发了10多封邮件,只有3个人回复我。
原因是:首先,他们不关心你的成绩,你的CV他们也不会看;其次你对他的兴趣没有体现出来,他们觉得你只是在广泛发邮件而已....

然后我换了个形式,从他们的目前研究课题出发套词,不用这种方式发,其中某个当时没回复的老师第二天一早就回复我了。虽然这个老师后来又不鸟我了,不过这种方法来说肯定会好许多
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