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waitingwy

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[交流] Those days flower blooming

Flying birds ever exhausted have flown past from the sunset
The urban losing stars is only accompanied with shadow

Dreams ever forgotten have been still on the way
Seeking not go backward cannot recognize the home in the distance

Have those days flower blooming been kept at the end of retrospect?
We ever been young are  separated on the horizon

Those days flower blooming have still been at the end of retrospect
Standing under the distant starry sky, sing the songs at that time

Flying birds ever tired have flown over the sunset
The urban lack of starlight was wormed by the songs

Dreams ever forgotten have been still on the road
Searching not returning home cannot see her at remote

Have those days flower blooming been stayed at the end of retrospect?
Lovers with tears are  separated on the horizon
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Originally posted by li123cl at 2011-06-15 11:13:08:
nice  sentences。。。。。

thanks!
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nice  sentences。。。。。
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You have exquisite sentiments these days. I can't figure you out completely. Is it about youth, about dream in your poem? Or anything else?
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poem, not easy to understand, but , beautiful, also a little sad.
人活着好没意思啊
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