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qingfeng6081

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[交流] Leaving

The day for your leaving, as you graduated. Leaving me alone at the room. I just wish someone can talk with me, listen to me. I may do many things for you if you stay with me. I feel blue, so despressed to do anything. This boring things reallly confused me. Time for examines, stacks of homework and endless work, I had to admit that I was defeated. No joys would appear in my life but I have to pretend happy. Fake smile disguise my inner emotion. I wish to see rainbow again since I was 11 years old. I count the memory you left to me. Forgive me for failing to stop my tears flowing. I only feel free when is embraced with the darkness. I thought to give up but I had no courage. Life should be a balance, now you are suffering from your pain but one day you would get the same amount of happiness. I try cheat myself tomorrow will be right. On doubt that the world is full of beautiful and amazing things, who ensure  you that one day you can get even you have tried your best. I don't know what the future will be, but I just try to get something and protect something even it doom to a  fantasy.
       These days I felt tired and here to complain. Now I feel better. Where are you?
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19楼2011-09-07 12:49:48
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qingfeng6081(金币+1):谢谢参与
It\'s really a sad time to say goodbye. But we have to since we have to welcome a new life ahead for us. Cheer up, you should try to have some change. Good luck to you. ANyway, wish you happy on Children\'s day!
4楼2011-06-01 07:59:46
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qingfeng6081(金币+1):谢谢参与
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Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-06-01 07:59:46:
It\'s really a sad time to say goodbye. But we have to since we have to welcome a new life ahead for us. Cheer up, you should try to have some change. Good luck to you. ANyway, wish you happy on Ch ...

I really agree with you!
6楼2011-06-01 08:14:02
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phu_grassman(金币+2): You shouldn't be so serious, what you said may offend the auther. 2011-09-02 13:54:25
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1楼: Originally posted by qingfeng6081 at 2011-05-31 22:43:24:
The day for your leaving, as you graduated. Leaving me alone at the room. I just wish someone can talk with me, listen to me. I may do many things for you if you stay with me. I feel blue, so despr ...

Who is “you” indicating?
Your girlfriend or your roommate?
You really made me confused!
How can you do this ?
You have been in a chinese think pattern when you're writing something.
You know, what should be emphasized in English writing is explicitness not obscurity ! You should always try to make your prose or composition understandable or no one from other cultures would like to read what you have written except we chinese!


[ Last edited by 寒雨人生 on 2011-9-2 at 09:53 ]
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