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bewin29

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[交流] Poem of Birthday

9125 days to coin

to obtain

a piece of armor

a handle of sword

However

I don't look forward to

being protected

by the armor

Just desire the sword

can shine ray of hope

In my own hands



Writen

in

Dragon Head-raising day
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bewin29

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没什么人气,呵呵
4楼2011-04-25 09:50:16
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huangzx1314

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bewin29(金币+1): Thanks for your response. 2011-04-25 11:50:33
excellent ~~~

6楼2011-04-25 09:56:24
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牛哥哥

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poem of birthday?
7楼2011-04-25 09:57:57
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Originally posted by bewin29 at 2011-04-25 09:50:16:
没什么人气,呵呵

English please!
8楼2011-04-25 10:06:52
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bewin29

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2011-04-25 10:06:52:
English please!

Oh, I'm sorry
10楼2011-04-25 11:51:12
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bewin29(金币+1): U're so clever! 2011-04-25 17:15:15
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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2011-04-25 10:06:52:
English please!

The lunar calendar February 2
11楼2011-04-25 12:04:24
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bewin29(金币+1): Yes, on Dragon Head-raising day last year~ 2011-04-25 17:15:52
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Originally posted by bewin29 at 2011-04-25 09:33:02:
9125 days to coin

to obtain

a piece of armor

a handle of sword

However

I don't look forward to

being protected

by the armor

Just desire the sword

...

Writen
on
Dragon Head-raising day

12楼2011-04-25 12:21:46
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shuiyang163

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bewin29(金币+1): Thanks! 2011-04-25 17:16:01

blessing for you
13楼2011-04-25 12:23:52
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wangwing

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happy birthday
15楼2011-04-25 14:19:14
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holding the sword, be strong, protect by yourself.

you can.
16楼2011-04-25 14:28:31
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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-25 12:04:24:
The lunar calendar February 2

Thanks! But is it today?
17楼2011-04-25 15:17:12
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It's really talented of you to write this nice poem.
18楼2011-04-25 16:38:04
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bewin29

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Originally posted by wangwing at 2011-04-25 14:19:14:
happy birthday

It's on Dragon Head-raising day last year, but thank you also
19楼2011-04-25 17:20:30
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bewin29

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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-25 14:28:31:
holding the sword, be strong, protect by yourself.

you can.

Thanks for your mutual encouragement
20楼2011-04-25 17:21:16
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bewin29

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Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-04-25 16:38:04:
It's really talented of you to write this nice poem.

Thanks, from now on I'll strive all the time
21楼2011-04-25 17:22:50
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Originally posted by bewin29 at 2011-04-25 17:22:50:
Thanks, from now on I'll strive all the time

Good luck to you.]
22楼2011-04-25 18:29:27
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yinjuanchen

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I know your mean suddenly.
23楼2011-04-25 20:23:01
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bewin29

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Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-04-25 18:29:27:
Good luck to you.]

The same to you
24楼2011-04-26 09:34:08
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bewin29

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This is a poem I wrote to my girlfriend on her birthday last year
26楼2011-04-27 11:24:03
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yixinling

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2011-04-25 10:06:52:
English please!

I guess Dragon-Head Raising day means 二月初二——龙抬头。
27楼2011-04-27 12:36:14
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H954720898

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xia_chong(金币+1): :D I think you can have a try! 2011-04-27 13:43:53
a really beautifull poem. can I send to my girlfriend on her birthday? and encourage her to strive all the time to arrive at her small dream even if I can not accompany with her someday.
28楼2011-04-27 12:59:42
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Originally posted by yixinling at 2011-04-27 12:36:14:
I guess Dragon-Head Raising day means 二月初二——龙抬头。

Thanks!
29楼2011-04-27 13:43:27
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bewin29

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Originally posted by yixinling at 2011-04-27 12:36:14:
I guess Dragon-Head Raising day means 二月初二——龙抬头。

You got it finally...
30楼2011-04-28 09:39:03
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bewin29

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Originally posted by H954720898 at 2011-04-27 12:59:42:
a really beautifull poem. can I send to my girlfriend on her birthday? and encourage her to strive all the time to arrive at her small dream even if I can not accompany with her someday.

Best wishes for you two...
31楼2011-04-28 09:42:09
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leafyf

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why call poem of birthday, i don't know
32楼2011-04-28 12:49:35
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简单回复
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2011-04-25 09:37   回复  
小木虫(沙发+1,金币+0.5):恭喜抢个沙发,再给个红包
bewin29(金币+1): 恭喜抢个沙发,再给个BB 2011-04-25 09:41:40
bewin29(金币+1): 没什么人气嘛~ 再给你一个 2011-04-25 09:47:53
wry33003楼
2011-04-25 09:41   回复  
小木虫(金币+0.2):抢了个小板凳,给个红包
li123cl5楼
2011-04-25 09:51   回复  
bewin29(金币+1): 辛苦了,先发一个 2011-04-25 09:53:20
2011-04-25 11:08   回复  
bewin29(金币+1): 2011-04-25 17:14:19
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2011-04-25 13:13   回复  
bewin29(金币+1): Hi 2011-04-25 17:16:10
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2011-04-26 09:34   回复  
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Originally posted by yinjuanchen at 2011-04-25 20:23:01: I know your mean suddenly.

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