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【Pure water】what is love?
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why you love it? I think you love he or she is not the reason that you need it when you hungry, or when you thirst . But you miss he day and night. When he bring to your mind you feel quiet happiness. If these sentences have error, can you tell me? Thank your very much! |
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10楼2011-04-15 16:51:14
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witch_girl(金币+1): nice~ :D 2011-04-14 18:21:37
witch_girl(金币+1): nice~ :D 2011-04-14 18:21:37
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I think you love he or she is not the reason that you need it when you hungry, or when you thirst . But you miss he day and night. When he bring to your mind you feel quiet happiness. I think the reason why you love him or her is not like that you need it when you are hungry or thirsty, but that you miss him or day and night ... |
4楼2011-04-14 17:06:38
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witch_girl(金币+2): wow~ good~ *^_^* 2011-04-14 18:22:22
witch_girl(金币+2): wow~ good~ *^_^* 2011-04-14 18:22:22
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why do you love it? I think you love him or her is not because you need it when you are hungry, or thirsty . But you miss him day and night. When he occurs to your mind you feel quite happy. If these sentences have any errors, can you tell me? Thank you very much! [ Last edited by lppv on 2011-4-14 at 17:10 ] |
5楼2011-04-14 17:09:53
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witch_girl(金币+2): nice~ but "when he or she on your mind "? :tiger02: 2011-04-14 18:24:27
witch_girl(金币+2): nice~ but "when he or she on your mind "? :tiger02: 2011-04-14 18:24:27
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I think you love he or she is not the reason that you need it when you hungry, or when you thirst . But you miss he day and night. When he bring to your mind you feel quiet happiness. Why do you love.... I don't think the reason that you love someone is that you need it when you are hungry or thirsty.  变得不够抒情 You miss someone day and night,when he or she on your mind you feel quiet and happy.[ Last edited by poyoro on 2011-4-14 at 17:42 ] |
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