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the MM in the last photo yourself£¿
Thebestlifeisnomorethanchattinglaughingoutloudduringtheday,andhavingagoodsleepatnight.
12Â¥2011-04-06 20:51:39
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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-06 16:23:57:
shangchuan is upload.

is the person in the third picture you?

13Â¥2011-04-07 08:37:32
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Originally posted by liufawen at 2011-04-06 20:51:39:
the MM in the last photo yourself£¿

guess it
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14Â¥2011-04-07 08:38:29
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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-06 16:23:57:
shangchuan is upload.

is the person in the third picture you?

do you have a good time in zhengzhou during the toob-sweeping days ?
µêÆÌhttp://shop65451224.taobao.com/
15Â¥2011-04-07 09:34:48
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liufawen

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Originally posted by ´ºÅ¯»¯¿ª at 2011-04-07 08:38:29:
guess it

16Â¥2011-04-07 09:35:29
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I like the translation of places in the forth picture~
especially"cut-off-feeling hollow"~so interesting!
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17Â¥2011-04-07 22:00:30
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Originally posted by zhouweixia at 2011-04-06 19:42:33:
how beautiful scene !  I like the places have sea . The day before yesterday i went to Qiu jiang sea world in Xi an .At there i saw many kind of marine animals .in short , i had a happy day .

Some mistakes:
There are two verbs in the sentence I like the places have sea .
In addition, the definite article here is misused as well as the verb have.
Maybe you'd better write as this:
I like places neighboring to the sea.

Before the adverb there, the preposition at is epactal.

You've missed an s behind the word kind.

Marine organism may be more appropriate than marine animal here because animals usually don't live in the sea.

[ Last edited by paulpaulzj on 2011-4-8 at 10:38 ]
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18Â¥2011-04-08 10:20:45
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Thank you

Paulpaulzj ,thank you for your help ! I hope you can also help me to improve my English in later !
19Â¥2011-04-08 17:45:51
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Originally posted by zhouweixia at 2011-04-08 17:45:51:
Paulpaulzj ,thank you for your help ! I hope you can also help me to improve my English in later !

We can learn from each other. I'll try my best.
Later is an adverb, so the prepostion in is epactal here.
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