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春暖化开

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Originally posted by zhouweixia at 2011-04-06 19:42:33:
how beautiful scene !  I like the places have sea . The day before yesterday i went to Qiu jiang sea world in Xi an .At there i saw many kind of marine animals .in short , i had a happy day .

Some mistakes:
There are two verbs in the sentence I like the places have sea .
In addition, the definite article here is misused as well as the verb have.
Maybe you'd better write as this:
I like places neighboring to the sea.

Before the adverb there, the preposition at is epactal.

You've missed an s behind the word kind.

Marine organism may be more appropriate than marine animal here because animals usually don't live in the sea.

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your tour photo?
人活着好没意思啊
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xuanxuankaoyan(金币+1): your english is so funny. 2011-04-06 19:10:06
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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-04-06 15:46:32:
your tour photo?

yes

yesterday i went to ningbo took these pictures

there are mang ,but toolarge ,hardly to shangchuan
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Originally posted by 春暖化开 at 2011-04-06 15:52:10:
yes

yesterday i went to ningbo took these pictures

there are mang ,but toolarge ,hardly to shangchuan

shangchuan is upload.

is the person in the third picture you?
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