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Some mistakes: There are two verbs in the sentence I like the places have sea . In addition, the definite article here is misused as well as the verb have. Maybe you'd better write as this: I like places neighboring to the sea. Before the adverb there, the preposition at is epactal. You've missed an s behind the word kind. Marine organism may be more appropriate than marine animal here because animals usually don't live in the sea. [ Last edited by paulpaulzj on 2011-4-8 at 10:38 ] |

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