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My mother is in Beijing now, I met her in west station of beijing. I was so happy to see her here, thought I was late for the train, she can come out of the station by herself! That's so wonderful, It seems that I don't have to worry for her that much, I should believe my mother will take care of herself thought she couldn't read a word. On the way back to my place, we took a taxi. That's the first time my mother takes a taxi in Beijing and the driver drived so fast and changed lanes frequently. Then my mother said: how could you always take the other's way? The driver laughed and explained to her: I changed it but I did't influence them. Mum said: you can't do that, that's not right and not safe, you can drive on your own way, and you make me feel so terrible. I want to say something but the driver said quickly: Ok! if that makes you feel not good, then I will drive slowly, I did't mean to scare you! My dear lovely mother, That's her!hehe  |
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nice mini-essay...brilliant! but no offence,
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xuanxuankaoyan(金币+4): excellent correction! 2011-03-14 20:33:31
xuanxuankaoyan(金币+4): excellent correction! 2011-03-14 20:33:31
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line 1 'thought I was late for the train...' read' thought I was late for the pick-up at railway station(West Station)...otherwise could cause confusion...If I am wrong, pls excuse me forthis. line 2 'should believe' read 'should have believed'... line 5 'Infuence' I think,should better change into 'interfere' which has the meaning of 'get in the way of'.Influence maybe refer to some long-term effect. Best Wishes |
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