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[½»Á÷] ¡¾Original¡¿Brooklyn Bridge

The weather is very fine today. I am walking along the street to the Brooklyn Bridge alone. Now it is noon,air is warm and moist. The wind blows my face gently and relaxes me. The blue river is flowing quietly and few seagulls are flying in the sky .How beautiful it is!
The Brooklyn Bridge over the East River connects Brooklyn to Manhattan. There¡¯re about thousands miles of cable in the Brooklyn Bridge. The cables make up several huge nets on the side of bridge. The vehicles on the bridge like the river flowing.
Standing on the bridge, I can see the Statue of Liberty on Liberty Island. I know that the statue has become a symbol of freedom and of the United States. The statue of the distant looks beautiful and peaceful. The helicopter are flying across the sky and taking my thought away.
Loneliness begins to hold me. If my family were here, I would be very happy. Maybe they will come to New York this summer. We will enjoy this charming scene together at that time.
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such a wonderful scene~

wish you and your family get together soon~

wish you live happily there~

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9Â¥2011-03-07 12:02:29
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now it is not noon here,  it is morning
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4Â¥2011-03-07 10:24:39
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Thanks for moderator's encouragement.I get the first ESEPI.
5Â¥2011-03-07 10:57:45
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Originally posted by wyxt at 2011-03-07 10:57:45:
Thanks for moderator's encouragement.I get the first ESEPI.

i believe your english must be much better than mine.

and your passage is wonderful, it deserves an ESEPI.
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