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bjsd2008

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[交流] 请高手看一下该如何修改这两句话?

原文CH4 uptake rates exhibit a great difference among different ecosystems because various environment and management factors, including soil temperature, moisture, texture, tillage, N fertilization, and land uses, affect CH4 uptake (e.g. Smith et al., 2000; Tate et al., 2007).

审稿意见为 Check syntax and avoid replications as; …. difference among different…..  

原文High oxidation activities (61-85% of the control value) were maintained when the slightly saline soil were treated to moderate to high salinity.
审稿意见为 Check syntax.
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bjsd2008(金币+3): 感谢交流! 2011-04-26 00:06:01
我个人觉得可以如下修改:
CH4 uptake rates exhibit a great difference among various ecosystems resulted from environment and management factors, including soil temperature, moisture, texture, tillage, N fertilization, and land uses, affect CH4 uptake (e.g. Smith et al., 2000; Tate et al., 2007).
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猪会飞(金币+3): 鼓励交流 2011-02-22 13:17:56
bjsd2008(金币+3): 感谢交流! 2011-04-26 00:05:07
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Originally posted by bjsd2008 at 2011-02-21 17:03:23:
原文CH4 uptake rates exhibit a great difference among different ecosystems because various environment and management factors, including soil temperature, moisture, texture, tillage, N fertilizatio ...

就是简单的语法问题,既然你用了differences 就不要再用different,这是重复,也就是他说的replication.

第二句个人觉得有点冗长,能不能简练点说,你要表达的中文意思是什么?依然保持氧化活性(61-85%的控制值)当微盐渍土处理到中度甚至到高盐度?还是其它意思?
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bjsd2008(金币+3): 感谢交流! 2011-04-26 00:05:20

"a great difference among different ecosystems because "

a great variation among different ecosystems because of
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xj850626(金币+1): 鼓励交流 2011-02-22 21:37:00
bjsd2008(金币+2): 感谢交流! 2011-04-26 00:05:25

1. Different CH4 uptake rates exhibit among different ecosystems because .....

2. Even the slightly saline soil were treated to a moderate to high salinity,  the high oxidation activities can be maintained within the control value range of 61-85%.
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