审稿人说：But from my view the current manuscript is too preliminary to warrant publication and requires deep revision. Author's reasoning is frequently incomprehensible because of the abundance of the grammatical and stylistic mistakes. Moreover I have few remarks and questions.
1. The part Discussion requires serious modification.
想请问下，这里说的grammatical and stylistic mistakes是指全篇的吗？还是仅仅指Disscussion部分的，是否需要全篇做grammatical and stylistic mistakes的修改呢
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