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Long, long ago, black clouds blot out the sky. The dreary air of the hospital was filled up with depression and failure. The pressure was out of his control and put him in hospital. Looking back to his experience, one of the greated "scientist" and "doctor" in the world. Lying in the bed and staring at the ceiling, he thought that he was actually a loser and regretted for everything he had done.

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at the beginning, you give us a suspense:what has he done ?

waiting for the more wonderful plot.
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seems a good beginning~
waiting for the following story~
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What is it? A story ?
Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves!
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