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TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people." TOPIC: 1. a society's ideas and values is a synthetic concept by mixing various people or groups. 2. same appearance and behavior of people would not share same ideas and values in different society. 3. a society's ideas also should do research with a historical view. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Admittedly, you can tell about people's attitudes and interests through the way people look, dress, and act. But you will fail to analyze a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people in my opinion. In the first place, a society's ideas and values is a synthetic concept by mixing various people or groups, while an individual is only with common interests and attitudes. In one given society, some people unite one special group with their unique ideas and values which can be reflected by their appearance and behavior, the others will unite a different group with dissimilar ideas and values to the former. You could not tell which one is current in contemporaneity. So you would be confused about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and hehavior of its people. For instance, Hippies in USA with unique appearance, hair style, behavior could reflect the young group's ideas and values which was freedom but rebellion against the current ideas and values of USA society in 1960's. Only through synthesis of both of them can you tell a real ideas and values in American society at that time. As a result, we should consider a society’s ideas and values as a whole but not do them as a part in order to get an authentic . On the other hand, there is the same appearance and behavior of the people in different society. A solid example is that the people in jeans in different countries might not share the same ideas and values of their own society. In China, it was a unique character that the young people with jeans shows their fashionable and distinguished manners against the adult's conservativeness in 1980's. At the same time, wearing jeans just means a leisure life style in USA. Furthermore, the people living in different society with the same ideas and values, might be various appearance and behavior. For example, the people in UK share the same society's ideas and values with the people in USA since they have a close relationship in history, but they have different taste in dress, food or game. The English like the formal style in dress while the American like the leisure style. American football is totally different to the soccer in UK. So we could easily comprehend different appearance and behavior of between the English and the American while they own the same society’s ideas and values derived from the same ancestor. Last but not the least, a society's ideas and values were cumulated with lots of factors in a long term. Basic ideas and values in a special society could not easily change, but the appearance and behavior of its people is always unsettled in different periods or situations. Hippies were replaced by Yuppies. But chasing freedom and creativity is still the part of basic ideas and values in USA. Brush pen was replaced by pen. However, chasing beauty and artistry of handwriting is still basic attitudes to culture in China. In nother words, a society's real ideas and values hide in its history and its people. If we regard one special part while ignore the other, we will inevitably fail to achieve the real ideas and values of a society. In conclusion, if you want to find more details about a society's ideas and values, you should make a synthetic analysis through observing the appearance and behavior of the people, connecting all parts in a society with pantoscopic reseach, and exploring every facts in a society with historical view. |
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TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people." 题目大意：人们的眼神衣着和行动表现了他们的态度和兴趣，你可以通过观察人们的外表和行为来获知这个社会的想法和价值。 属于：进步/进展产生于持不同意见的人们的讨论TOPIC: position： Part agree 1. A society's ideas and values is a synthetic concept by mixing various people or groups. 2.Same appearance and behavior of people would not share same ideas and values in different society. 3. A society's ideas also should do research with a historical view. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Admittedly, sometimes you can tell about people's attitudes and interests through the way people look, dress, and act. But it cannot (you will fail to删) analyze a society's ideas and values all round by observing the appearance and behavior of its people （in my opinion删）. In the first place, a society's ideas and values is a synthetic concept by mixing various people or groups, while an individual is only with common interests and attitudes. In one given society, some people in （unite删）one special group with their unique ideas and values, which can be reflected by their appearance and behavior; The others will in（unite删）a different group with dissimilar ideas and values to the former. So you could not tell which one is current in a definite contemporaneity. And （So删） you may(would be 删)confused that whether （about删） a society's ideas and values come from by observing the appearance and behaviors of its people. For instance, Hippies in USA （with删）which have unique appearance, such as their hairstyle and their behavior could reflect the young group's ideas and values which symbolized (was删) freedom and （but删） rebellion against the current ideas and values of USA society in 1960's. Only through synthesis these aspects （of both of them删） you cannot tell（can you tell 删）a real ideas and values in American society at 1960’s（that time删）. As a result, in order to get an authentic ，we should consider a society’s ideas and values not only analysis it (do them删) as a part such as observing the appearance and behavior of its people， but also have to give it a overall analysis（. as a whole but not do them as a part删） On the other hand, sometimes the people in different countries （there删） may have some（the删）same appearance and behavior （of the people in different society删）.For example （A solid example is that删）the people in jeans in different countries might not share the same ideas and values of their own society. In China, it was a unique character that the young people with jeans shows their fashionable and open（and distinguished manners删） against the adult's conservative in 1980's. At the same time, wearing jeans just means a leisure life style in USA. Furthermore, the people living in different society with the same ideas and values（, 删去这个标点）might in （be删） various appearance and behavior such as（. For example,删） the people in UK share the same society's ideas and values with the people in USA since they have a close relationship in history, but they have different taste in dress, food and （or删） games. For example the English like the formal style in dress but（ while删） the American like the leisure style. And the American football is totally different to the soccer（ in UK删）. So it （we could 删）easily to be comprehend that although there are different appearance and behavior （of删） between the English and the American but （while 删）they have （own删） the similar （same 删）society’s ideas and values which derived from their （the删） same ancestor. Last but not the least, a society's ideas and values were cumulated in （with 删）lots of factors （in a long term删）. The basic ideas and values in a special society could not be changed easily （change删）, but the appearance and behavior of its people is always unsettled in different periods or situations. Such as Hippies were replaced by Yuppies. But chasing freedom and creativity is still one（ the 删）part of basic ideas and values in USA. In china，Brush pen was replaced by pen. However, chasing beauty and artistry of handwriting is still a basic attitude of China’s culture（s to culture in China删）. In （n删注意拼写错误）other words, a society's real ideas and values hide in its history and （its 删）people. If we only regard one special part while ignore another （the other删）, we will inevitably fail to get （achieve删 ） the real ideas and values of a society. In conclusion, if you want to find more details about a society's ideas and values, you should not only make a synthetic analysis through observing the appearance and behavior of the people, but also have to connecting all parts in a society with pantoscopic research, and exploring every fact in a society with historical view. [ Last edited by hummer on 2006-7-5 at 13:05 ] |
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细抠词句的我就不写了，斑竹改的相当好 Admittedly, you can tell about people's attitudes and interests through the way people look, dress, and act. But you will fail to analyze a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people in my opinion.开头直白，实际考试中比较实用 In the first place, a society's ideas and values is a synthetic concept by mixing various people or groups, while an individual is only with common interests and attitudes. In one given society, some people unite one special group with their unique ideas and values which can be reflected by their appearance and behavior, the others will unite a different group with dissimilar ideas and values to the former. You could not tell which one is current in contemporaneity. So you would be confused about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and hehavior of its people. For instance, Hippies in USA with unique appearance, hair style, behavior could reflect the young group's ideas and values which was freedom but rebellion against the current ideas and values of USA society in 1960's. Only through synthesis of both of them can you tell a real ideas and values in American society at that time. As a result, we should consider a society’s ideas and values as a whole but not do them as a part in order to get an authentic .[这段嘻皮一族的例子，最好写得明白一些，写一下嘻皮当时与主流有差别，但依然代表了美国青年的时代特征。] On the other hand, there is the same appearance and behavior of the people in different society. A solid example is that the people in jeans in different countries might not share the same ideas and values of their own society. In China, it was a unique character that the young people with jeans shows their fashionable and distinguished manners against the adult's conservativeness in 1980's. At the same time, wearing jeans just means a leisure life style in USA. Furthermore, the people living in different society with the same ideas and values, might be various appearance and behavior. For example, the people in UK share the same society's ideas and values with the people in USA since they have a close relationship in history, but they have different taste in dress, food or game. The English like the formal style in dress while the American like the leisure style. American football is totally different to the soccer in UK. So we could easily comprehend different appearance and behavior of between the English and the American while they own the same society’s ideas and values derived from the same ancestor. [本段后一个例子与本段主题句不是很照应，建议重写本段主题句，把本段两个例子所要表达的观点写成一起] Last but not the least, a society's ideas and values were cumulated with lots of factors in a long term. Basic ideas and values in a special society could not easily change, but the appearance and behavior of its people is always unsettled in different periods or situations. Hippies were replaced by Yuppies. But chasing freedom and creativity is still the part of basic ideas and values in USA. Brush pen was replaced by pen. However, chasing beauty and artistry of handwriting is still basic attitudes to culture in China. In nother words, a society's real ideas and values hide in its history and its people. If we regard one special part while ignore the other, we will inevitably fail to achieve the real ideas and values of a society. 挺好 In conclusion, if you want to find more details about a society's ideas and values, you should make a synthetic analysis through observing the appearance and behavior of the people, connecting all parts in a society with pantoscopic reseach, and exploring every facts in a society with historical view. 与全文照应挺好 |
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