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chuhongyun

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[交流] 【求助】daily compositon_No.1: University Banking

When it comes to the topic "university ranking", it's no doubt that there should be both favorable and unfavorable viewpoints among people. At present, it's common to see various versions of university ranking on internet.
         Some people hold the views that university ranking is benefitial for universities to make progress in all kinds of field, such as the achievements of science study and the more perfect system of regulation.That is to say, it's true that the survival  of the fittest.
         Others believe that university ranking has distoried the educational system in China. First of all, to some extent, university ranking  is inequal in itself, because the standard of ranking is bias for different study fields in different universities. For example, the best university according to the ranking may have some weaker studying fields than those universities at the back of the ranking list. What's more, the worse universities according to the ranking won't enroll good students year after year, even can't satisfy the given contingent. The  consequent is obvious that these universities will be promising year after year.
          Taking into account of all above factors, I can't support university ranking. Besides, some measure must taken, before things goes worse, to stop university ranking as quickly as possible.
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Originally posted by yinliguo09 at 2010-12-19 12:38:29:
Some people hold the views that university ranking is benefitial for universities...
benefitial“” should be "beneficial".

Others believe that university ranking has distoried the ed ...

Some people hold the views that university ranking is benefitial for universities...
benefitial“” should be "beneficial".谢谢指出

Others believe that university ranking has distoried the educational system in China.
“distoried” should be “distorted”.谢谢指出

That is to say, it's true that the survival  of the fittest.
the survival the fittest 这个词组使用的不错,但是that后应接从句,这句话语法有问题。改为:That is to say, the survival  of  the fittest is a truth.?

The  consequent is obvious that these universities will be promising year after year.

“consequent” should be “consequence”.谢谢指出
be promising? 这是想表达什么,不太理解。我想说:这些学校越来越差。

some measure must taken
'measure' should be 'measures' 谢谢指出

文章用了一些高级词汇,很多句型也很典型,是一篇很好的六级作文,值得学习。
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chuhongyun(金币+1): 2010-12-19 12:41:33
Some people hold the views that university ranking is benefitial for universities...
benefitial“” should be "beneficial".

Others believe that university ranking has distoried the educational system in China.
“distoried” should be “distorted”.

That is to say, it's true that the survival  of the fittest.
the survival the fittest 这个词组使用的不错,但是that后应接从句,这句话语法有问题。

The  consequent is obvious that these universities will be promising year after year.

“consequent” should be “consequence”.
be promising? 这是想表达什么,不太理解。

some measure must taken
'measure' should be 'measures'

文章用了一些高级词汇,很多句型也很典型,是一篇很好的六级作文,值得学习。
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