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hquhuhuawen

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English is a language which needs your heart to be keen on if u want learn it well.
这句话有语法错误吗,请高手指点,特别是这里的定语从句能这么用么?
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五四青年

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浮云。。。(金币+1):翻译的不错,鼓励一下! 2010-10-24 16:24:01
hquhuhuawen(金币+3): 2010-10-29 13:00:06
English is a language which needs your heart to be keen on if u want learn it well.

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which needs your heart to be keen on这句话什么意思啊?说不准,觉得不是很好的表达。if you want to learn it well. 不定式标志to 要用上。
我认为是不是要说 English is a language which needs enthusiasm if you want to learn it well. ?
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小凡578

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hquhuhuawen(金币+3): 2010-10-29 13:00:11
am007(金币+1):谢谢交流 2010-10-30 09:27:06
English is a language which needs your heart to be keen on if u want learn it well.

want to do sth
感觉这样比较好English is a language which needs attention to learn it well ?
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wangping7570(金币+1):感谢交流,O(∩_∩)O~ 2010-10-30 21:34:41
English is a language which needs your heart to be keen on if u want learn it well.
由于有不定冠词a,我感觉which应该改为that。
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English is a language which needs to be keen on if u want to learn it well
我感觉这样更好,避免重复
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