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[交流] 【Original】help!is there any syntax error or sentence pattern not right or ....

     The opinion that schools should specialize in one subject, they think that not everyone are perfect. If one have any dominant character and make the best of it, he can acquired it. For example, Langlang, he have a talent for piano, he become a pianist by hard work. If he employ himself in other jobs, what will be happen, then we can’t get so beautiful music, and the world will lose a great pianist.
      While others think that students should learn a range of subjects. The modernization of science and technology is the most obvious sign of the social. The information is connecting, if one get it as much as he can, and learn to it’s best advantage, then he will benefit of his learning. Steve Jobs had said “The dots will somehow connect in your future”.
     As a graduate student. to my way of thinking. We should specialize in one subject, and know many other subject. Because it was impossible to connect the dot learning looking forward when you was in college.

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poyoro(金币+10): 2011-03-23 00:10:26
the so beautiful music  __ i think you should delete the "the"~~

benefit of __  I think it should be "benefit from"

ps: i cant understand your last sentence,what does it mean?

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Originally posted by 兰蝴蝶 at 2010-10-04 14:49:50:
the so beautiful music  __ i think you should delete the "the"~~

benefit of __  I think it should be "benefit from"

[ Last edited by 兰蝴蝶 on 2010-10-4 at 14:51 ]

" .....get so beautiful music....." what about delete "so".
and may i use another words to express .  use some phrases

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-10-04 14:47:59:

"what will be happen"  it sounds strange.  is there any words can replace?
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poyoro(金币+5): 2011-03-23 00:10:38
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Originally posted by poyoro at 2010-10-04 14:59:40:


"what will be happen"  it sounds strange.  is there any words can replace?

I think we should try to be perfect in ONE field and try to know more things in other fileds.
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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-10-04 15:02:01:



I think we should try to be perfect in ONE field and try to know more things in other fileds.

nice words~~
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Originally posted by poyoro at 2010-10-04 14:59:40:
"what will be happen"  it sounds strange.  is there any words can replace?

What will happen? is better.
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I'll try tomorrow if I have time.

I am very tired now.

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2011-03-23 00:16:10:
I'll try tomorrow if I have time.

I am very tired now.

JiuMin

It was a long long time post , I only sent the BB to you and  Lanhudie.
There is no need to  correct it  
Y ou really  tire, you are dizzy
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