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duan2008

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[交流] 英语翻译求助

Step 1: Alarm receipt
After an accident has occurred, workers in the monitoring centre find the accident in the plant covered by monitoring system. At the same time, the accident victims or witnesses can raise the alarm on the emergency telephone in the accident region or by cell phone.
Step 2: Emergency evaluation
After receiving an accident alarm, the emergency command center immediately records the accident information, including time, place, accident type, accident description and so on, makes a preliminary analysis and confirmation, and the emergency rescue pre-project will be generated automatically. Simultaneously, the accident information will be issued through the monitoring system and supporting system.
Step 3: Launched corresponding emergency plans
After confirming the accident type and the accident region, the accident commander will launched the corresponding emergency plan through the emergency command center.
Step 4: Emergency rescue actions
And then the all emergency rescue orders will be issued through the emergency command center and the emergency rescue project will be carried out. According to the different rescue requirements and functions of teams, the accident and rescue requirement information will be distributed to all the relevant teams which are involved in the rescue. Sometimes, because of the instability of the domino accident, although the emergency rescue team shall actively adopt salvaging measures so as to prevent elevation of its seriousness in the early stage of emergencies, the impact of the domino accident is still unfolding. So, when the accident uncontrolled, it is necessary to increase the rescue forces.
Step 5: Emergency recovery
After victims are rescued and the accident is controlled, the accident commander can declare a state of emergency recovery. Its major tasks are: first, to unset the dangerous condition; second, to clear the accident site; third, to investigate the accident; Finally, the incident commander, by various approaches, needs to placate the neighboring citizens and reassure the victims.
Step 6: Evaluate result and feedback
After the rescue action is finished, the emergency command center issues an order that the emergency response has ended. The commander needs to thank all of the members who executed the ERS, and then requests the spokesperson to hold a press conference to explain the whole process of handling the accident. At the same time, the emergency command center will record a detailed accident rescue treatment and evaluate the treatment result. On this basis, the emergency command center will update the emergency resource database and to send feedbacks to emergency command center to improve.

请高手帮忙看一下,检查错误,并采用地道的表达方式,谢谢。

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duan2008

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Originally posted by xiaoboshen at 2010-08-22 16:20:08:
最好能给出 中文意思 那样有助于理解 和修改

中文意思就是上面一个高手翻译的,呵呵。你能不能帮我把英语改得地道一点,加一些地道的过渡词之类的,谢谢。
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wypward:请楼主及时评分 2010-08-26 08:51:38
duan2008(金币+4): 2010-10-14 16:12:40
第1步:报警回执
事故发生后,在监测中心的工作人员通过监测发现,在系统内的工厂事故。同时,事故受害者或证人可以对事故地区打紧急电话或手机报警。
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duan2008(金币+5): 2010-10-14 16:12:33
第2步:紧急评估
在接到事故报警,应急指挥中心立即记录事故,包括时间,地点,事故类型,事故描述等,作出了初步分析和确认,以及紧急救援项目前会自动生成。同时,会通过监测系统和支持系统发出事故信息。
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duan2008(金币+4): 2010-10-14 16:12:28
第三步:推出相应的应急计划
在确认事故类型和事故区域后,事故指挥官将通过应急指挥中心启动相应的应急预案。
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