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fangye0413(金币+2):2BB for reward of participation~ 2010-07-21 12:07:11
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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-21 10:57:56:



It depends on where the ghosts are from.

The ghosts from Japan, South Korea, and Thailand are most scaring. They will kill anyone who happened to meet them no matter whether they are good  ...


Actually,the culture may orginated from China.

In the ancient time, people preferred to beleive.

And this can resist the morality question.

but now we have our law.

so people now don't belieive this like their ancestors.


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21楼2010-07-21 11:04:34
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xia_chong

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Originally posted by yuaneyuping at 2010-07-21 11:04:34:




Actually,the culture may orginated from China.

In the ancient time, people preferred to beleive.

And this can resist the morality question.

but now we have our law.

so people  ...

Yeah.
Just one little correction.
beleive >> believe
And "receive" is right while "recieve" is not.
I remember in high school, my English taugth us to notice these two words.
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22楼2010-07-21 11:06:59
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yuaneyuping

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-21 11:06:59:



Yeah.
Just one little correction.
beleive >> believe
And "receive" is right while "recieve" is not.
I remember in high school, my English taugth us to notice th ...

Thank you
I just feel something wrong .
And I have corrected it.
hehe.
23楼2010-07-21 11:11:37
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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-21 11:00:46:
Sorry, I found the mistake.
The past tense of "bleed" is not "bleeded", but "bled".
Thank you very much! I gain knowledge.

So, what did you really want to say then?

Did you mean "His head was broken and his head was bled" or "His head was broken and his head bled"?
24楼2010-07-21 11:12:34
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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-21 11:12:34:


So, what did you really want to say then?

Did you mean "His head was broken and his head was bled" or "His head was broken and his head bled"?

I mean "His head was broken and his head bled". Because these two sentences share the same subject "His head", I wrote them together. Is that wrong?
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Originally posted by yuaneyuping at 2010-07-21 11:11:37:



Thank you
I just feel something wrong .
And I have corrected it.
hehe.

That's good! Add oil~
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26楼2010-07-21 11:15:19
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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-21 11:12:34:


So, what did you really want to say then?

Did you mean "His head was broken and his head was bled" or "His head was broken and his head bled"?

I think maybe can use"was bleeding"?
27楼2010-07-21 11:18:39
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zerohead

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xia_chong(金币+1):Thanks! 2010-07-21 12:09:54
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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-21 11:14:55:
I mean "His head was broken and his head bled". Because these two sentences share the same subject "His head", I wrote them together. Is that wrong?

Well, as an independent sentence, “his head bled” would be ok. But for the situation you tried to describe, the poor old man’s head should be "bleeding”, as pointed out by yuaneyuping. Now, you would know how to make the first correction.
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Originally posted by yuaneyuping at 2010-07-21 11:18:39:
I think maybe can use"was bleeding"?

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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-21 11:56:15:


Well, as an independent sentence, “his head bled” would be ok. But for the situation you tried to describe, the poor old man’s head should be "bleeding”, as pointed out by yuaneyuping. ...

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Originally posted by yuaneyuping at 2010-07-21 11:18:39:


I think maybe can use"was bleeding"?

Thank both of you!
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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-21 11:56:15:


Well, as an independent sentence, “his head bled” would be ok. But for the situation you tried to describe, the poor old man’s head should be "bleeding”, as pointed out by yuaneyuping. ...

in my opinion,
bleeding is better than bled,
at the same time
"his head bled"is not a wrong scentence
how about?

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