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zerohead

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fangye, you are right, that's what I believe, but someone around is quite persnickety. So I just "give him a hand".
11楼2010-07-21 08:57:14
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xia_chong

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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-20 18:48:18:


XC, thanks for your corrections. I appreciated that.

Would you mind have a look of the following article? I tried but just couldn't be able to count how many errors in there. Well, at least  ...

That's great! Would you please pick them up and correct them? I will appreciate it! And give you BBs.
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12楼2010-07-21 09:17:43
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zerohead

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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-21 09:17:43:
That's great! Would you please pick them up and correct them? I will appreciate it! And give you BBs.

I thought that's the job you like. So I just provide some sections which would be more meaningful to you.
13楼2010-07-21 09:46:52
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xia_chong

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lxuyan(金币+2):That's your responsibilities to be a moderator~ Well done,baby~Please continue to try hard!:tiger28: 2010-07-21 10:42:52
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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-21 09:46:52:


I thought that's the job you like. So I just provide some sections which would be more meaningful to you.

I like picking up other people's mistakes. In fact, when writing every post, I pay much attention to my grammar. If I think it is wrong, I would correct it. The mistakes maybe those I am not sure, or I do not take notice of. I don't mean to make mistakes or do not correct them when I know they are wrong. Anyway, if I find some mistakes of other chongzis, I would correct them if I think they are willing to improve their English. That's my responsibilities to be a moderator. It doesn't mean that I look down upon their English. Learning is a lifetime thing. I can make mistakes too.
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14楼2010-07-21 09:51:28
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zerohead

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lxuyan(金币+1):I hope you can help us to point mistakes as more as possible,we are waiting for you...Please give us a handhttp://emuch.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=2029740&fpage=1 2010-07-21 10:45:28
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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-07-21 09:51:28:
I like picking up other people's mistakes. In fact, when writing every post, I pay much attention to my grammar. If I think it is wrong, I would correct it. The mistakes maybe those ...

That's very good and I can understand. I didn't mean anything negative here. Just want to let you know we are only human, no one is perfect.

Well, back to the point, that section really has too many mistakes.
15楼2010-07-21 10:11:27
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tampopoamin

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l donot believe ghosts,but l am afraid of something  unnature,and that cannot explain by science!
16楼2010-07-21 10:42:46
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zerohead

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lxuyan, ok, if you don't want to point a finger and also very much want to know, I can give you the first hint, how do you think of the following sentence?

"... head was broken and bleeded."
17楼2010-07-21 10:51:13
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yuaneyuping

I don't beleive.

But if something like that being.

That'll funny.They will magic like Harry James Potter.or be stronger than that?

hhe,I don't know.
18楼2010-07-21 10:51:16
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xia_chong

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Originally posted by yuaneyuping at 2010-07-21 10:51:16:
I don't beleive.

But if something like that being.

That'll funny.They will magic like Harry James Potter.or be stronger than that?

hhe,I don't know.

It depends on where the ghosts are from.

The ghosts from Japan, South Korea, and Thailand are most scaring. They will kill anyone who happened to meet them no matter whether they are good people nor bad people.

The ghosts from HK, China only haunt those who killed them.

But I like watching ghost movies from Japan, South Korea, and Thailand.
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19楼2010-07-21 10:57:56
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xia_chong

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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-21 10:51:13:
lxuyan, ok, if you don't want to point a finger and also very much want to know, I can give you the first hint, how do you think of the following sentence?

"... head was broken and bleeded. ...

Sorry, I found the mistake.

The past tense of "bleed" is not "bleeded", but "bled".

Thank you very much! I gain knowledge.
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20楼2010-07-21 11:00:46
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