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Hello, everyone.

There are large numbers of essay and articles writting in wonderful English but sometimes we can not understand why their expressions are better than others.

My suggestion is that someone submit aa excellent English article every day and subsequently, we can present our oppinoins stating why this article is better than others. Alternatively, we can submit a bad artile and then improve it.

[ Last edited by hanjun80 on 2010-7-13 at 10:40 ]
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lxuyan(½ð±Ò+1):When we understand the cultural background , we can better use the language.:tiger02: 2010-07-13 11:31:40
I think that the difficult understanding is mainly caused by different culture.
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That's a good idea! We will discuss about it! And we really appreciate it! Thank you again~
Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves!
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good idea~
you really do a good job~
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Originally posted by rzhheart at 2010-07-13 11:02:14:
good idea~
you really do a good job~

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Originally posted by yuaneyuping at 2010-07-13 13:54:52:

agree!!!!

If you want you can , you can .

Welcome to give us other suggestions



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Originally posted by rzhheart at 2010-07-13 11:02:14:
good idea~
you really do a good job~

agree!!!!
6Â¥2010-07-13 13:54:52
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Originally posted by hanjun80 at 2010-07-13 10:39:30:
Hello, everyone.

There are large numbers of essay and articles writting in wonderful English but sometimes we can not understand why their expressions are better than others.

My suggestion is ...

A good idea. We will award this kind of posts.
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