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Today my oral English teacher Pam will go back to NewYork,Pam is a good teacher and a good friend of mine at the same time. Every morning we get up at 5:30 to go for a walk and we chat with English during the walk.I improved my oral English so much which's out of my imagination.I remember I didn't say anything the first time I went to her apartment,but I can chat with her and express myself.I am grateful of her help.Wish her have a good trip in New York! This is my first time to write something in English,please check it if there is any wrong. Thanks! [ Last edited by fangye0413 on 2010-7-1 at 08:30 ] |
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Good job, i didn't find any piace wrong, i feel it's very fluent! |

2Â¥2010-06-30 19:04:09
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fangye0413(½ð±Ò+2):I think so ,still wishes for you^_^ 2010-06-30 19:18:48
fangye0413(½ð±Ò+2):I think so ,still wishes for you^_^ 2010-06-30 19:18:48
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you have a good foreign english teacher. practice surely can make you get a huge progress in a comparatively short time. and i think you'd better practice with others often without being along with your teacher.Wish you a more success in the future. |
4Â¥2010-06-30 19:09:07
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