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Elementary School Leaving Certificate
--Newcomb's street elementary school Shandong Ji Ning (September, 1996 ---June, 2001)

Name: ****, male, borned in 1989, 8th of Mar.
ID card number: 370802198903083***

This is hereby certify that **** has been studying in our school since September, 1996 to June, 2001(FIVE-YEAR Elementary SCHOOL SYSTEM) He has finished primary school and did well in every class. During school study, **** is an excellent student with good academic records. He studied very hard and passed all the tests.
He has a very good personality, outstanding and friendly.
This is hereby to be certified.


                               Newcomb's street elementary school of
                                             Shandong Ji Ning City
                                


                                           Address: 12, Newcomb's street  
                                                   JiNing, Shandong, China
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zlqhl(金币+20, 翻译EPI+1):非常感谢!谢谢! 2010-06-09 09:33:00
wypward(金币+1):欢迎新虫,谢谢参与 2010-06-09 11:10:20
He has finished primary school and did well in every class. During school study, **** is an excellent student with good academic records. He studied very hard and passed all the tests.
改为:During his study in our school, he finished primary school with good academic records through his hard work.

He has a very good personality, outstanding and friendly.
改为:He is an outstanding student also with good personality, friendly to everybody around him.
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