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xu2005nan(金币+1):谢谢参与
xuchun007(金币+3):thanks 2010-06-06 13:07:59
xu2005nan(金币+2):谢谢你的参与,你已被评为本期优秀译者! 2010-06-07 09:20:00
汉译英
1. A pill is being developed which can free people from the suffering caused by heart disease. People in their middle age taking this pill regularly can prevent themselves from develping diseases like artery blockage or even fatal vascular occlusion.

2.The sky over China's land is no longer as clear as before according to reports from Chinese researchers, for which polltion is probably responsible.

英译汉
近年来,有各种各样的塑料制品问世:有导电的,有随着温度或电压改变颜色的,有可以被水冲洗掉的,有可以在太阳照射下60天后分解而不会破坏环境的。

[ Last edited by sima022225 on 2010-6-8 at 10:48 ]
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Scientists are preparing for a new medicinal tablet which can make people avoid the pain of someone got heart disease or on his dying breath. people can prevent themselves from artery blockage or the development of fatal vascular occlution if men and women in mid-life eat that medicinal tablet on a regular time schedule .
on the basis of the report which china research build, that the sky of china is not sunny as before, the chief offender which make that kind of condition may be pollution.
最近这几年我们经常看到人类的最新发明导电塑料产品,导电塑料在不同的温度或者是电压下就会改变他们的颜色,这种塑料能被水冲走而且它能够在阳光照耀60天后自动分解而不会污染环境。

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xuchun007(金币+3):谢谢提示 2010-06-06 13:09:57
题目是我找的,就不参加了。
记下几个值得学习的地方
1. 罪魁祸首 sth is to blame
2.中国的天空 原文用了over China,非常简洁
3. Recent years have also seen the invention of plastics
这种句型翻译时,无需把recent years作为主语。主语可以淡化处理,不必译出。
4.标点符号
英译中原文列举的多种塑料之间用的是逗号,而译为中文后则改为分号,是否有这个必要?值得日后注意。
4. “根据中国研究人员的报告”
这类表达在中文和英文中的位置往往是相反的。中文多喜前置,而英文则多放在最后,翻译时需注意下。
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when the next topic will public?
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